Oh, um, wow, yesplease. Gawd that was delicious. *fans self* For a first smut that was incredible... I still remember how mine turned out. *dies of shame* Anyhow, please keep up the lovely work!

A-haha! *This* is exactly the kind of thing I was looking for when I logged on to FF tonight... Reminds me of my own stories, and I love graphic ones, like this...

Great job, BTW. It never skips a beat, and Genesis and Seph... Wow, one of the hottest (and my fave) pairing! Wonderful story, I'm adding it to my faves... Then I'm gonna go see if you have any others like this!

it was so hot, wow loved it, ah, and this is my fav pairing, love them. *_* awesome fic. _

Aww Bless their cotton socks :3

All you need now is MUCH MORE smut... maybe that's just me...

I liked it! )

The predator-like traits from Sephiroth are . . . Just awesome, not sure how else to describe it, heh.

That last line was sweet.

I noticed one, little mistake that doesn't even take from the story.

“What re you doing here? I thought you- A re. )

Anyways, good job.

Mwaw :3

Warms my heart that ending does. And the rest?

You said it was smut. That is NOT smut. That is slash. That is Yaoi at its best my friend and I did not know you had it in you :P

I love the way you managed to say 'lemon' in it lawl xD

Keep Writing :P

Ho