I really like the story and the direction it is taking. Hope you get back to it soon. :)

a seriously fabulous

Jesus Christ ! You can't just leave it there ! It's almost been a year !

Please come back to this fic we're all waiting for :)

well I thought the code was kinda obvious, I mean if you have a code of random words in front of you the first thing most people do would be to read it as an acronym... i think especially with the instructions at the start telling them what to do, that's way too easy and would easily be deciphered by anybody intercepting. how did they send an email anyway?

Really loved it, but...

I'm waiting for more.. however, i know you have a life. but please finish this? PLease? lol

Its great so far, really well written.

I love this story and am still longing for a new chapter.

Brilliant, can't wait for the next chapter!

[Smiles happily] Ah, there are precious few writers who grasp the concept of good prose. It kills me to find so many writers whose imaginations soar, whose stories contain such twists and surprises that keep and reader riveted, but are so heartbreakingly let down by their lack of care and poor attention when putting their words to paper. A rushed story will never live up to it's full potential. HOWEVER, your story has got to be one of the most well written that I have been fortunate enough to come across on FF. The description is excellent, giving a vivid picture without boring the reader by rambling on for too long, and your grammar and structure is also brilliant. Your story itself is also extremely fascinating, tantilising the reader with just enough information to get them hooked and leaving them with and cliffhanger that has them thirsting for more without being too frustrating or annoying. I urge you not to fall into the trap of rushing future chapters or stories because of pressure from your reviewers. It is much better to keep up this excellent standard of writing than to churn out rapid but sloppy stories. Thank you and well done, I greatly look forward to reading more of your work.

I am just now catching up on this story. It's a wonderful start! B&B; in the jungle, bad people on their tail, near death experience. I hope you update again soon.

Great story! Please update soon! ~Lyra

Pereybere, my dear!

I so desperately need your update in this piece.

Please, keep writing!

This is a very good beginning. You have a very interesting place to start from and the opportunity for lots of excitement along the way. I hope you continue soon.

o update soon!

Great start. Got me hooked right away. Would love to see an update.

Wow. This story is great! I can't wait to see what happens next Update soon, please! :D