Wow...

I love how you describe Soubi's feelings... I think he's not easy to write, but you did it really really well.

I was surprised that you jumped from the message of Seimei's death directly to Soubi going to meet Ritsuka.

I mean, maybe I'm stupid, but I always thought there was some time between...

Oh well, whatever, lovely story, characterisation, (kio!)...^^