This was really, really good. The feeling of helplessness and having to hide who you are, the fear and tension and sadness - I felt them very much. War sucks.

Lovely metaphor. I enjoyed this.

a beautiful story centering around a character that lets be hinest the series could have done more with. Great work!

that was kinda different, but i liked it! it was very sweet & simple.

That was cute! :) (Haru doesn't get enough love, the poor girly-man. XP) I love the whole way his mother tells him to do stuff and all-very nice. Keep it up! D

This was good! You should add more to it, kinda going into Haru's preAang life or something.

Haru

This was a pleasant surprise. It's not often that fics delve into minor characters-even less ones from earlier in the show-so finding this was about Haru was unexpected but nevertheless intriguing.

This is a very nice piece...very introspective. I think that you managed to pack a lot of significance into so few words. Fantastic job.

Nice story. Is good to see fics abuot previous life of minor characters. This one reflects perfectly the feeling of impotence of the Earth kingdom about the war (And Haru's life). Good work!