I've been reading fan fiction since it was news groups. hands down this is the best piece of fan fiction I have ever read. i laughed out loud, I cried and parts just left me breathless. bravo x

This story is so amazingly well written, I can’t get enough of it. I have no idea if you are still on this website but you truly have a gift. There was so much angst, I was yelling at the characters to get their sh*t together. Love the ending and the trip to the future, thank you!

Gah! I've just ploughed through this so fast! I had meant to review every chapter but got so engrossed I barely paused between chapters! I LOVED and HATED this story! You have done this SO BLOODY WELL! You encompass their characters so well, you give a little of what we want but take so much away! You make it so REAL! It was nothing like those fluffy little love pieces. It was raw. It was painful to read. It was frustrating. I wanted to hit them SO MANY TIMES! Argh! You have written this so, so well!

I have no idea if you're still on this site. I just wanted to tell you that I've just spent the last 2 days rereading your story while recovering from surgery. This is one of the best fan fictions I've ever read. It's beautifully written, poignant, and with such great insight into the characters.
I'd forgotten the ending. My husband had a stroke 5 years ago at the age of 47. He has profound speech problems as well as hemiparesis. I was in tears. the story hit very close to home.
Anyway, I just wanted to tell you again what a wonderful author you are. I know I reviewed many times as you were writing this but felt, after rereading, I should tell you again :)

Thank you so much for writing this. Your superb ability to write for these characters was shown in every chapter. The story was magnificent, and I was hooked through to the bittersweet end. How wonderfully you portrayed their lives through thick and thin - the poem at the end encapsulated everything beautifully. Much love.

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This story is just amazing! I know I'm a little late to the party but I've only discovered the world of fanfiction recently. I just wanted to say that this story is epic. Definitely one of the best I've read. Thank you!

I stumbled across this yesterday and just finished reading it and I just want to say... Brava. What a stunning work of art this story is. I am crying, not just because I am heartbroken but because there is still joy to be found. The poems interspersed throughout are not the only poetry in this story- your writing is poetry.

This whole thing is perfection

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Why is he being like that. I thought he would be more supportive of her although I do sense that he would be shocked. She needs him! She can't do this alone. Great chapter btw. You have a way with words :)

I don't like that she is alone. But yeah she had to break up with that guy. What a prick. He was never good enough for her.

I like the details of Elliot and Olivia complicated relationship. I hope it works out for them in the end

I cannot believe I have only just found this. Your writing is amazing, to me you captured the absolute essence of Elliot and Olivia.
Words cannot describe how much I enjoyed reading this, absolutely loved it.
I was already hooked and then I saw who your beta was and I smiled. She is also a wonderful writer and you both have such talent.
Thank you for this.