I rewatched ATLA recently and when I first discovered it I was not that big in the fandom world and now I decided to search for some stories about one of my favourite couples and I am so glad I did. The story is really beautiful and I am really looking forward to reading the rest of it. I love the inner turmoil Zuko is going on and the focus on him feeling fake when he is called Lee. I really love it, and I always love the supporting Iroh! Thank you so much for sharing this lovely story!

Zukoooo...

Ok Katara was VERY out of character. I mean she was the first to trust Zuko as soon as he showed signs of good, so she should trust him. She would have made someone hold Aang then dived in there saving both Zuko and Jin, then quickly with a level head she would have bent the water out of her lungs and healed her, because Katara is good at keeping her wits about her when people need her. She was quick thinking and had Zuko's back even when he turned good the second time and she hadn't forgiven him, because...she will never turn her back on people who need her. I know you needed a reason to separate them, but this was the lazy way.

"Next one will be out soon" they said

Hey Wacky, are you there? I really love this story and if it has been abandoned I would like the chance to adopt it.

GODFUCKINGDAMMITTHEYWERESOCLOSE

You should be slapped for making Jin sad
Damn it I should be sleeping!

I've only found this ship today and fallen in love with it.

Your story seems to do it justice

I would really like to see an update even if it is just to say you don't want to or can't finish it.

AWWW CUTENESS!

I finally got around to finishing this, and I just want to say that it's really great. The concept is unique and well thought out. I really hope you finish this at some point

In just a short five days I've read the entirety of this story, and the Ursa spinoff, and I just wanted to say that I absolutely love how you've written it. Yes, there are some mistakes here and there, but what really kept me reading is your characterisation and all the different characters' stories and backgrounds that feel so natural as you read them (granted I did skip some gAang parts because I didn't care about them so much). I love how you gave life to these dirtpoor peasants and gave them history, feelings, personality, a voice. I love how you described the struggle of living in an Industrial Revolution-esque society where children have to work to keep the family alive. I love how this is not /just/ a love story but also about inner conflict and reflecting on your mistakes. I love how you explored how the Fire Nation would operate once they'd invade Ba Sing Se (even though it's gruesome). And I love how you made it episodic, giving the reader a glimpse into every character's life. But most of all, I would love for you to be inspired to write again and maybe continue this (or Ursa's) story. Lots of love 3

Wow. I skipped from chapter eight to here to discover that this is is two hundred and seventy thousand words of pure angst and drama with only enough plot to allow maximum angst. Congratulations, you have severely disappointed me. I was hoping for something with a bit more... substance.

The mental turmoil is indeed what makes Zuko so universally loved.

I will make sure you get 700 reviews!

Cuteness!