This was such a touching piece! You did an amazing job on it. _

This is beautiful! I can tell you are very skilled with language. I love the way you were able to lace each word with the right hint of emotion, making me as the reader think and really analyze Sasuke's relationships with his family and peers. Keep writing!

I am impressed. Amazing work. The description was detailed and beautiful, you really have a talent of transferring empathy through your writing. I loved Sasuke's thoughts about Itachi and his older team, even his new team. Your take on his emotions is really great, and even though I haven't read that far in the manga (in fact I've barely read past the 3rd manga haha) I've researched enough not to spoil anything for myself which I haven't already, so it makes me happy as well.

I honestly can't think of anything to critique you on, I love your writing style .

~~Arra~~