 ChikaPyo 8/3/11 . chapter 6nuuuu!
it was getting so interesting!~
TToTT
keep it going.
^^ |
 YoulookbetterwhenI'mdrunk 9/9/10 . chapter 5dude this is |
 Leo's Katanas 8/6/10 . chapter 4Awesome story so far!
I can't wait for more! |
 Akiofthefunk 4/23/10 . chapter 4ano, I see that you havent updated in over and i was wondering if you are going to continue with the story, ano, I think its really good! :D please please please xa thousand continue! :)
~Akki :3 Nya! |
 AngelOfPastPresentAndFuture 2/8/10 . chapter 4Oh, Kyouya as the dominant one and Dino as the submissive is somehow very sexy ...
I really liked it, I hope you'll update soon, I can't wait to see what'll happen next.
Cheers, |
 turtlelikelemon 11/17/09 . chapter 1I'm looking forward to the other chapters..
hehe hibari going crazy because of dino (not knowing what he did)
ahaha i like your plot for this one! :)
great read! :) |
 whitewolfhikari 7/2/09 . chapter 3i kinda feel bad for Dino but then again. |
 RooDooDoll 5/13/09 . chapter 2F Cute. XD
Good luck with everything, Hiba and Dino! *throws confetti* |
 vegibee 4/27/09 . chapter 2PLEASE please pretty please... update your next chapter... please... i like hibari paired with dino... please... pretty please... |
 thPeekaBoo 4/17/09 . chapter 2So-Sorry! TT_TT I actually missed out this -3-..
Here's a review for you! :D
Dino, just call Hibari 'Kyoya.'
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That's was kinda.. O_O [breathtaking i mean.]
Nice job! :D |
 YaoiFanaticFreak 4/3/09 . chapter 2Lavender : Good job! Muahahahahaha!
Himawari : Thanx for the update! -smile-
Lavender : I LOVE you! seriously! LOVE you so much!
Himawari : yeah.. i love you too because making this story. it's great you know?
Lavender : I WANT MORE!
Himawari : don't shout Lavender, Yukino-chan knows that.. |
 Sandy11-1990 4/3/09 . chapter 2t-that's d18 SMUT. YES! LOL *nosebleeds to death* you have some pretty weird descriptions (no offence) but it's good enough (such that i can totally see it happening)...
er:
"Some of his hair was sticking to his face because of when the water touched it."
is pretty weird O_O maybe something like "the damp hair clung to his pale face in the reflection." or something _ well i'm not a writer so i don't really have the right to complain... ignore this if you think i'm sh*tting... or something.
but as a D18 fan i'm gonna complain: DINO HOW COULD YOU CALL YOUR "KYOUYA," "HIBARI"? D: |
 MyraHellsing 3/29/09 . chapter 1My vote's for Kyouya!
Dino's had his spotlight in Ch1, i think it's time to take a look at what Kyouya's up to *w*
update soon ^^ |
 YaoiFanaticFreak 3/27/09 . chapter 1Lavender : just update fast yo-
Himawari : Lavender, no curse!
Lavender : Hmmpphh! Hate you!
Himawari : Love you too.. Do you know that we already off the topic?
Lavender : I know! -glare at the author- UPDATE FAST! and MORE LONGER! |