love it! will this be a longer story?

take care

Loraine

oh. Poor Georgiana. I know this might sound stupid, as I have not read Pride & Prejudice for quite some time now, why did you name Darcy Fitzwilliam? If it's in the book I'm sorry for asking such a stupid question.I love Kiera Knightly's Elizabeth, and I can literally see this happening! Great job with the period english as well.

You have a very interesting plot here. Though it's not canon, it's intreiging never the less. However, I feel your ending, whether this is just a one-shot or the begining of a multi-chapter fic, is a bit rushed. Georgiana is obviously upset that Fitzwilliam has categorized her lost brothers as ghosts, yet almost immediately Lizzy suggests they go to bed, which I feel kind of ruins the climatic moment. Even just sentance to the effect of "They sat in companionable silence for a while," would rectify the situation.

In other news, I think your Fitzwilliam is a very in character portrayal. It is a generally well written and well crafted story. Bravo!

~Marivan

wow... this is new.

I hope darcy and lizzy reconcile with each other... why is lizzy living with them if she is just the fiance?

Great start. Looking forward to more of this.

Strange, but fascinating. Update soon.

This is really interesting. Looking forward to finding out more about how it affected Dacy. You've also really made their spoken language sound like Jane Austen.