LOL I loved your imitations of all the other officers

You should write another sequel ;)

I know I'm leaving reviews all over your stuff from like three years ago and you're probably all, "What on earth?" But I've been reading back through after reading "Time On My Hands".

I wanted to say that I love that you've captured how epic I feel Janeway and Chakotay are. I love that you treat it as destiny (as I believe it was) and not just the attraction that occured due to their situation (as I feel it was written). The writers could have done so much more with it and captured so many more viewers, I think.

Also, as I read back through your older, one chapter things, I feel like I'm looking at the alternate Janeways and Chakotays he mentioned in "Time On My Hands". I don't know if that's how you had intended it, but that's what I see, and it's an expert tie in. It's almost like seeing all the different Links and Zeldas over the years in different games, except most Janeways and Chakotays come together.

I will say, though, that work was the wrong place to read this particular one, for a cold shower is undoubtedly out of the question. I need to go find a fan now or something.

Oh damn but this was good! Your talent truly knows no bounds!

Awww... this was so naturally written it didn't even seem "bad"... but oh so so bad. LOVED it

Definitely SQUEE worthy! I had to fight to stop from having a very loud fit of laughter as my husband would no doubt ask me what was so funny and I just don't think I could explain without sounding completely nutty. Why, oh why, did TPTB suck so bad at writing their own show? The world may never know :S

Woah, that was fun . I agree, the laughing scene is the best. But overall, this is so wonderfully crazy - knowing it would never, ever happen, but also knowing that this is what JetCers over the world have longed for.. any kind of scene would have done where they're alone! "Oh, to hell with it - let's DO IT. RIGHT NOW!" _

Brilliant, funny, steamy little piece. I love the laughter!

Cute! Loved the laughter