Ugh how pathetic bringing kelly in like this Badly done

I've gotta ask. Do Sean Murray and Rocky Caroll look like McGee and Vance?

Blackladder married Bellasario? How original. I'm sorry, I don't mean to sound cynical. I reall am loving this story.

Base Commander's name is Micheal Weatherly? How original. Come up with that by your self, did you? I noticed that Tony was suspiciously absent from this one. Why is that?

I really don't understand how this doesn't have more love. Personally, I would have Kelly alone being able to see the ghosts because she was supposed to die but lived through unknown circumstances. But that's me. Also, I would give people a heads up about how this kind of jumps all around-something like 'series of oneshots in the same AU' in the summary. But otherwise, this was beautifully written and I look forward to the next chapter, if there will be one.

Mann is actually would have been the "fourth" ex-wife, the second ex-wife was revealed in Season 11.

I actually wondered what would happened IF Kelly had survived but had suffered seemingly permanent amnesia due to injuries from the car crash; thus forcing her to be raised by another family while her own father believed her daughter to be dead? What if she had started to gradually remember bits and pieces after seeing her father once on TV (which happens on Season 3) only to fully remember by the time Harper Dearing's attack on NCIS happens and she hears it on the news?

Really love this but not sure if you know but gibbs is car is a 1971 Dodge Challenger RT Hemi not a classic charger.. Sorry I'm just being fussy lol but I have the same car and it's a beauty my favourite car.

Director of NCIS really? What a marysue fic. You should quit writing.

Are you ever gonna continue this? Please?

Excellent start! Terrific idea.

love how you used there real names

I love your story, please udpate soon.

love the story but one question I imaging Kelly looks like either Emma Stone or that wendy's girl on the commicals

Good story so far.
But... can i ask why the hell you put Tony and Kelly together? I mean, Tony and Kelly? You should've put Tony and Ziva together, yeah its done before so it may be boring but it goes. Tony?, with Gibbs' daughter, something so unlikely.