I LOVE THIS!

She feels no anger, no contempt. She doesn't consider it a betrayal. All she knows is that one moment he's hers, the next moment he's not. It's the first time that she's felt she's really lost anything to the other girl. Losing is bittersweet. ♥

Cute! I liked seeing what everyone else thought of them. Especially liked the line about it being their own inside joke.

This was wonderful. Simply, truly, completely.

Each perspective was unique and perfectly in character that it took my breathe away, It was so true and so honest and it made so much sense.

Thankyou for sharing

QM11

Absolutely BRILLIANT.

awesome!

I only recently started thinking about Dan and Blair, but I actually think they're great for each other... and I think you do a really great job of showing that through. I mean, yeah, sure, they disagree on a lot of things, but there's so much chemistry there that I don't see how the writers haven't seen that plot twist yet... or maybe they have... *crosses fingers.*

Good work.

S

Great story! I loved it! It was so true to Gossip Girl and the characters' way of thinking,the only surprise being that of Chuck & Serena, me thinking that they would be furiously wondering how the hell did Dair work and not Chair or Derena. But that's what i liked the most about the story, it brought in a new way of thinking and new way of story telling from variants third-point of views. Spectacular! The POV's of Chuck, Nate and Serena thought many may believe aren't true, they make perfect sense for them to feel that way and you wonderfully demonstrate that in your writing. It gave me a new way of thinking towards those characters and inspiration to write my own. THANK YOU! Had a joy reading this Dair fanfic as well as the other one, I Hate Myself. Please write more Dair stories!

I think it's cool you captured the aspects of the relationship WITHOUT a section from their perspective

PLUS:

Hell, she’s pretty certain he’s dedicated an entire sonnet praising the beauty of her eyes and knows for a fact that he is her personal shopping-bag-carrier on weekends

So freaking awesome!

This story was amazing. I more particularily enjoyed Rufus' part. (I'm a goner for puzzles metaphors, haha). I also loved the bit about Nathan, always a step behind on everything (that's SO true). All in all, your descriptions of the characters' psychics are very well done.

Here's the sentence i prefer : "[...] he hopes that the melded puzzle with the chaotic image is better than the picture on the box."

It was such a wonderful figure of style.

I feel so torn. I love Dair (this is amazing by the wya, made me feel melty and lovely thank you!) but I'm an original Derena shipper! Agh!

After having read this, it made my heart melt and made me want DB to happen on the TV Show so BADLY.

Every character's perception of their relationship was spot-on, IMO, realistic and poignant. Your writing is just perfect, the way everything was phrased and the way adjectives were used. Okay, it's not about grammar or anything else related to it, ... I just wanted to tell you how much I loved this fic and would like you to write other DB fics (quality-wise they rock, but not quantity-wise!).

How would you feel about writing a complete story instead of one-shots?

holy cow, this was amazing! :D

i love the dan/blair pairing and i hope that gossip girl will one day bring this pairing to television screens everywhere.

hehe, but anyways, back to the review.

i loved how honest and heartfelt it was.

absolutely amazing writing!

fantastic job!

Cool, I like Dan/Blair. I especially like the episode where they were acting out the play The Age of Innocence. The book their play is based on is really good too. Gossip Girl definitely seems like a modern remake of Age of Innocence with characters very similar to Dan, Blair, Serena, Chuck, Nate and Jenny.

aw my god! i totally loved it! its so sweet nice well structured... everything fits perfectly... u should write more about this wonderful pair... wich i think has the most possibilities of being succesful and have a nice life...they're like each others missing part! =) i do think they rock!

thanks for sharing this nice fic! take care =D

Loved it I read it over at livejournal amazingly put loved the end when you put how gossip girl was wrong and that it was for real