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The Reader Who Waits Expectant
10/1/11 . chapter 1
:) Can't wait for the next chapter! I love teen Spock. Please write more. :)
T
7/3/11 . chapter 1
This has alot of potential. An update would be nice or if you're not continuing the story add Complete!
The Reader Who Looked Eagerly
6/7/11 . chapter 1
Wonderful start! Wonderful story! A story that can go places! So... What are you waiting for? GO PLACES! :) Yay!
Loves Jack
4/8/10 . chapter 1
Just read your story, it's really good, I hope you will consider finishing it.
maiky1992
9/25/09 . chapter 1
thats really good. please go on writing. I want to now what happens beetween spock and kirk in their room.

thanks for writing!
SpiritBearr
7/28/09 . chapter 1
Very cute, interesting story. The characters are pretty spot on; especially for being 'younger' and not actually captain and crew yet, just in the academy. I would like to see a little more 'thought processes' of the characters, but that's just my personal preference.

I also LOVE your author's note. LOL!

'Oh, and there will be, under no circumstances, any frickin’ Spock make-out scenes unless he is under spores’ influence etc… Good heavens….'

*giggles* THANK you.
Giery
6/12/09 . chapter 1
This is a very good idea! I really enjoyed reading this first episode, I hope to see updates soon! Keep it up!
yumi2482
6/9/09 . chapter 1
interesting idea
spoodle monkey
6/4/09 . chapter 1
oh wow- great start! can't wait for more!
Elvenstar Imrahil
5/31/09 . chapter 1
Can't wait to see where this goes!

Poor Spock. I never understood why people like to pick on those who don't get offended easily. It's completely illogical.
Clarity2199
5/30/09 . chapter 1
Wow. That was really good. I hope I can find you again when you update. For some reason the 'alert' part doesn't work for me, anymore.

Really, I love what you're doing. I can't wait to see what comes next.

Clarity
Silver-ShadowSpark
5/30/09 . chapter 1
I like it. Looking forward to your next update.

Spark
Shinigami061
5/29/09 . chapter 1
OMG loving this so far! I love that you've set it during the Academy days (yay), and the Spock-Jim interaction was just so sweet. Spock's totally expecting another douchebag roommate and he gets the awesomeness that is Jim ^_^ And the "hit the sack" confusion was hilarious. Are you going to continue this once you're finished with "Ghosts"? Can't wait for the next chapter! :) More, please?

Shinigami06
Knoll
5/27/09 . chapter 1
Hah! Sounds good to me so far. I like McCoy's reaction to the news.

Can't wait to see more!
AkaiXTsubasa
5/25/09 . chapter 1
Awesome idea! I liked the 'hit the sack' bit. It really does sound strange doesn't it? I can't wait to see more. XD
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