 almp15 6/5/11 . chapter 3What is sakura doing there? What's up with that, isn't she soppose to be in the village hidden in the leaves? Answer/Upade soon! |
 ddcj1990 3/30/11 . chapter 3good chapter update soon |
 KitsuneNaru 10/24/10 . chapter 1interesting |
 NocturnalMacabre 8/2/10 . chapter 3I don't wanna sound rude, but what's up with all the three way parings? |
 Nozomi Ai -Eternal Hope Love 2/21/10 . chapter 3MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE ! |
 Queen of the Earth 2/20/10 . chapter 3cool keep going |
 Shadow the Hedgehog 12 2/14/10 . chapter 3Wicked Chap! Please Update Soon! |
 god of all 11/11/09 . chapter 3Great chapter and story so fair pleases continue the story soon. |
Magician Girl Mirani 9/4/09 . chapter 3This is quite interesting. I'm looking forward to the next chapter. I take it that Naruko is going to take the place of Jaden in this fic as we didn't see him. I like the adition of Akiza into the fic. She's pretty cool and if you think about it she could be Sakura's older sister or something cuz they both have pinky/reddish hair. I like the fact that you chose Atem as her middle name. That's pretty cool.
Um, don't you think that Naruko has too many powerful cards in her deck? I mea, it seems a little overkill. It's still good though and I liked the adition of the tuner monsters. Does she have Stardust dragon/ Does Akiza have her Black Rose Dragon? If this continues will Naruko meet up with Yusei in the future or something/ That'd be really cool!
PLEASE update this fic soon! I REALLY wanna know what's gunna happen next and I can't know that until you update so PLEASE update before I go completely nuts!
Until then
C'ya later
MG Mirani |
 IceGirl7 7/7/09 . chapter 3Please Update Soon! :3 |
 JadeStoneTheYounger 5/25/09 . chapter 3I really like your story so far. Please update again really soon. |
 YaoiLuvr 5/17/09 . chapter 3um... is this a yuri fic? I mean it's a good story so far and has a good plot as far as I can tell but... I'm not to into yuri. I don't mind if it doesn't go past kissing or anything. It's just not my cup of tea, er... some other drink anyway(I don't like tea). But... please tell me and I hope the next chap is up soon. ^_^' |
 Jimbobob5536 5/17/09 . chapter 3That deck is unfairly powerful. :) |
 lindon2 5/17/09 . chapter 3good fic |
 Jimbobob5536 5/16/09 . chapter 2Interesting so far. Later on in the story you should find a way to include the Gedo Mazo as something she has to face.
(If you don't know what that is read Naruto 447) |