this story is Super cool and i LOVE it i wish you'd write more please and *hands cookie* here is a cookie for you to please write more

woohoo! yeah! love it already! YEAH! *hands author axel plushie* FOR YOU!

I like it. :D I haven't seen a plot like this yet, and you wrote it very well!

You should definitely continue this.

i really enjoy this story and i cant wait for more :)

Cool chapter. I like it, so please update soon!

Oh dear, Axel going to befriend Marlene just so he could get to Roxas. Watch out Sora, Your suspicions are true. Well, I wonder how many feet are going to end up in his mouth. Absolutly wonderful.