More pleeeeeease!

What is this feeling of my heart ripping into two, ugh. That was utterly and unbearingly depressing. What a masterpiece;;

Aww, I wanted more of this. It's so intense and has so much anticipation! Ah, well.

Loved it as a oneshot too. :)

beautiful

Beautiful and sad...
Would have been nice if you continued it.
Thanks for writing this.

so touching and it's so hard to describe all of these Zutara feeling that stabbed me with their pure attraction. Your work is absolute brilliant

I remember this story. I tried to google it. No luck (I could remember elements in the story but not exact phrases, which is usually how I locate long lost fics). But then I figured any Zutara fic that stuck with me would probably appear on someone's recommendation/favourite list, and if not the story in particular, then at least another story by the same author (the latter held true, although the name displayed was Misora).

I am so glad to have found this again! It is better than I remember. The storytelling is gorgeous. I would love to read more, but as it is, I'd still come around for a read every now and then. Thank you!

:( sad

I think... it would be interesting to see where you would take this. It's certainly an intriguing set-up, especially since you've subtly drawn up the differences between Katara and Aang with their maturity levels. Aang's around Toph's age, isn't he? That makes is much more obvious how their attitudes toward each other would result in their eventual break-up - Katara's more ready to settle down and have a family, and even if Aang agreed with her on that, he still has too much wanderlust in his blood by nature.

... As for Zuko, I think perhaps him divorcing Mai (under any circumstances) would let him loosen up a little. He needs much more freedom of thought and expression than I think Mai is comfortable with, and that might be one of the things causing a rift in their marriage. Azula's not even necessarily the problem with the complaints about his reign, anyway - it's just never been a topic that's been properly assuaged (that idea about sending her up to the Northern Water Tribe for recuperation is a good one).

please write more!

So. Much. Angst. ARGH! Must. Read. More.

Please, please, please continue this.

ok like what. that was awesome. i was going to go to bed but then i read this gem. continue it. please. or don't. it was perfect as is. i love anguished zuko and lonely katara. they need each other! oh sob.

I love this. I read it when I was 12, nearly 13 and now I'm at an older age of 16, every line has a new meaning, a new implication. I guess I just wish I could've known what happens next. Thankyou for sharing it with us :)

My feelings! I just... I just can't.