*sigh* As always, it was a pleasure to get a happy ending. This story was, in my opinion, the proverbial cream of your joint literary crop. Keep writing, you two. When a person (or team of people) finds something they're good at, they should definitely not hang up their reins just as the horse is in full gallop.

Personally, I'd love to see something long-term, maybe the kids all growing up and having their own adventures, taking care of old man Reynolds. Wouldn't that be a hoot?

You know I generally dislike reviewing in mid-story, but this time I couldn't resist.

If you had actually killed my favorite soup-catcher-wearing vagabond, we would no longer be friends. ;o) And now, I'll continue the story, to discover whether we may remain friends.

More please... I think I'm addicted. I'm kindof sad I got all caught up... now the suspense is KILLING me

It was fantastic guys! Go Marcus! Go Marcus! Go Marcus! Good thing he popped the cap in the monster between personilities. Thanks so much for sharing your wonderful talent with us. So looking forward to the next one!

Yeah wedding coming up! And yay Marcus for finishing off the monster. The fight was a bit short, but I know writing that sort of thing can be a challenge and a half. Overall, I loved your story start to finish :D

Great, and now I have to go concentrate on work. How am I supposed to do that when I'm still all wound up over you almost killing Elizabeth?

Oh man this guy is so *(&#$(&* and he don't even know it does he? Hope Marcus has his game on 'cause he is going to need it. This is one dangerous animal, but then again so is Marcus. Looking forward to the next chapter.

I have to take a second to scoot back in my chair cause you're so good at keeping us on edge lol! Wicked chapter again. It's interesting how you write the different personalities of the bad guy and in a way that I can keep track of which one is dominant at that moment.

Thanks for sharing another chapter. This critter serious needs putting down, don't he? This guy is a Dean Koontz bad guy, so scary because just maybe there is one of these out there.

Great Chapter. Where's River? Is she on that ship with the nut?

Eep! Miracle! You cannot kill Elizabeth! Bah, no wonder you write fanfic for a Joss Whedon verse!

You're really annoyingly good at getting your readers involved in the story. I'm all tense now!

~goes off grumbling~

Awesome chapter. Can't wait to see if it is River or Marcus that gets to this guy first. Either way, he is so toast. Thanks for sharing.

Ok, I am sorry that I have never left a review before now but I just found your work a few days ago and have been reading it on my phone ever since. You are a master of words and tale telling. You have created and entire viewpoint from Joss' work that I am sure fans everywhere would agree that it follows common logic and is fantastically entertaining! Please keep up the good work and thank you so very, very much for every Firefly fic you have ever written on here.

You are killing me kiddo! This was awesome! Thanks for all the hard work and sharing it with us.

I just got back and caught up with the story. Wow it's a dark one and I'm enjoying it so much! I do love the moments that shine with hope, like Pierre's situation, that you two mixed in so it's not completely dark. Really great character development and progression in this one too. Looking forward to more :)