| Reviews for Worlds Fall Apart |
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lady-ribbon chapter 4 . 11/11/2012 Argh, this story is so well written and so addictive! I'm sorry that it hasn't been updated though in years. Do you have plans on finishing it, if ever? Heh...I just adore Seishirou's possessiveness with poor Subaru. He can't get a break in any world can he, the boy boy. And Kamui and Fuuma are great as well! You know, I never can understand why Fuuma is so tall in Tsubasa, when he and Sei-chan are pretty much the same height in X (actually, I think Sei's a bit taller). Ah well...It's Clamp...XD |
missjasmin chapter 4 . 5/2/2012 THIS IS GREAT! this is such a great history for our favorite vampire twins hehe. Can't wait for more! |
Fields of paper chapter 1 . 8/14/2011 BEAUTIFUL story! adding it to favorites! great, loved it! nice bible verse, btw! |
Nagasasu chapter 4 . 4/1/2011 Very much enjoyed this! The banter between Seishirou and Fuma was hilarious. Seishirou and Subaru's scene was this awesome balance of sex, violence, innocence and power. |
Lorraine chapter 4 . 2/15/2011 Histoire absolument géniale, c'est vraiment, vraiment méchant de ne pas la continuer. C'est passible de lapidation dans mon univers personnel. Translation (more or less): I loved it, it's a shame you didn't continued. Really, really naughty. |
Hee-so-kaa chapter 4 . 1/30/2011 Love it love it love it! |
AiNeko-chan chapter 4 . 1/25/2011 Aaaaaaw ;A; Just finished reading this story, and I was like, "My goooood I need the new chapter asaaaap ;;A;;" -when I checked the last time you updated this. Are you on hiatus? Please noooes. I love this story so much and I need the continuation :( The fluff parts are so cute love the way kamui being so tsundere, cool and fragile at the same time, like he's the mixed version of Kamui in TRC and X ;w; I love FuuKam parts more than SeiSub, although they are the main pairing here, wonder why. Altho they also look sexy with subaru getting addicted to Sei's blood ;w; The way you write it all make me feel like I'm reading the official novel version XD And, uh, yes, Overall, pleeeeeease update! :DD ~Aineko |
Turtle Kid the Woolgatherer chapter 4 . 12/24/2010 These relationships are so messed up. I like it. _ |
Rose chapter 4 . 5/18/2010 I know I already reviewed, but I so love this fic and I hope there'll be a new chapter soon! You've done such a beautiful job with the vivid imagery and the charactizations. You're doing such a gorgeous job with writing Subaru and Seishirou. |
clementine chapter 4 . 2/22/2010 What an amazing fic! I couldn't stop reading and when I got to chapter 4 I was so disappointed that there wasn't any more chapters. This was addicting to read and I'm eager for more chapters. Your portrayal of Seishirou and Subaru is so beautiful and full of longing; I love it! Seishirou's seduction of Subaru is so titillating. Keep going with the great writing. |
TheEndofTag chapter 4 . 1/29/2010 wow!...jsut love this story!...but too short!...only 4 chapters so far and only at the tip of the plot!...i am anxious for the story to unravel itself because i can't wait to see how Sieshirou and Subaru love developed...i really love this line: "For an instant Subaru felt that it was love, the deepest kind of love, the kind of love that could only have been nurtured through long meetings and even longer separations, the kind of love that he would have died for"...i wonder if this is about their past in a different world? probably alluding to Tokyo Babylon and X/19?...if that is true then it would just be like icing on a cake, too perfect!...otheriwse what could that line possible mean?...Seishirou is such a jerk...i wonder if he was playing around with Subaru about taking him away?..somehow his response back to Suabru when Suabru said no, sounds like a angry retort, trying to hurt subaru with his cruel words...I just love Subaru and Seishirou...they are the most adorable coupdle ever!...Kamui adn Fuma is adorable too!...these brothers are just too cute, each brother fallign for the other brother...hm...sounds to me like Kamui and Fuma are pretty serious in ther future love relationship adn yet in teh beginning they were fightign each other...i wonder what could possible happen?...anyhow just love this story!..you are an exceptional writer! totally love! |
mei wang chapter 1 . 1/8/2010 wow you can write are the first person I read that wrote this much .Great hook P.S(I've read most of your series but two days agoI learned how to make a review) |
mei wang chapter 1 . 1/6/2010 good storyline but kindab of weird that people wouldn't know what necro... |
Fai-Fia-Chan chapter 4 . 11/21/2009 I really like this story and hope you update soon! The A/N for some reason got me to laugh for 5 minutes :D... |
L. VanDattae chapter 4 . 11/14/2009 I love this story! Absolutely love it! Reviewing late, but uh, better late than never? And it would be a pity if I didn't tell you how many times I'd read this chapter... XD Hm, the black whips you speak of? I always thought they were cables from the building (which seemed to make more sense to me than whips appearing out of nowhere) that he was manipulating, and of course, he can only control them because as Kamui he was... "psionic" is the word I believe Viz uses to describe their power. I could be wrong though. Sometimes the graphics are hard to understand. And though I never got the impression Fuuma of TRC had that power, I have definitely been enjoying all the little references to X! _ Subaru's doves for instance. It makes the story so much more rich! I also enjoyed Seishirou and Fuuma's "talk." Though I am curious after reading this chapter... the curse Subaru used on Sei in chapter one... it was temporary? He seems to have his power back now. I was also sort of surprised Subaru didn't really use necromancy this time (or maybe I'm just interested in seeing more of it), but then, maybe there are rules I'm not aware of, and I loved it all anyway! Ah, poor Kamui when he finds out that Fuuma and Sei are brothers! I hope you continue. TRC needs more good fics like this for these characters! |