Great story!

Short but sweet, and though I don't see Max using the f word, overall it is an accurate depiction of their relationship. It's nice seeing a story about these two.

Keep up the good work.

Thoroughly enjoyable story and completely unexpected in terms of obstacles. Again, I believe you've written these two gents down perfectly: easy to 'see' and 'hear.'

I do wonder why the precinct has a lawnmower? maybe it once had grass on the roof? Good job!