That is one of the best storyies i have read in a while

Wow, that was really funny! Yay Adam beating Don! Even if the last number was Stella's.

hahahahaha that was funny :) great job!

xoxokat

Hee hee-this is beyond cute. I'm impressed. I'd love to have seen Adam's face when he made that call! :)

That has got to be one of the funniest stories I have ever read! I loved it!

hahahaha. hilarious. nice to see something on the CSI NY ff page that isnt depressing...well, i can speak for myself on that.

Awesome story! I really enjoyed reading it :)

Omg! This was so damn funny! Danny's story telling was hilarious. I was roflmao! Gotta run, got to go to the bathroom 'fore I make a mess from laughing so hard.

Wonderful work!

OH MY GOD! THIS IS SO FREAKING AMAZING! LMAO! Oh...let me calm down, okay I'm good now. Everything about this is pure gold, from the bantering between Don and Stella to Danny pumping Adam up, and the cherry on top was Lindsay smacking Don for cheating on her. Even if Adam didn't technicality win, I'm glad that he got some numbers out of it, he deserves some love. :) Excellent job! I have to go reread it again! Bye!

Favorite conversation:

Ah,” she sighed. “I think I feel like lobster tonight. How about you Adam?”

“Thanks for the meal Don.”

“Yeah, thanks, you shouldn’t have- oh wait, you didn’t have a choice in the matter!”

“Seriously Messer, shut up.”

That and the last line...like I said, pure gold. XD

great story, you should do a series like this! you managed to write a humorous, entertaining story without making it stupid or over the top. It was believable and you kept everyone really well in character. It was a pleasure to read! :)

Absolutely amazing! The ending was hilarious, especially the final line. Very well done. It's about time someone took Flack down a peg.

LOL the end was awesome. I'm am still cracking up. I was wondering where that number came from, I just felt like it had something more. Great story!

That was tres amusing! I loved the Lindsay bit, after the manaquinn scene I can so imagine her slapping him! Stella was brilliant, I liked how you showed her as being playful as well as the fact Adam was somewhat the star! Great story! x

*rotflol* Wow, this was fantastic! You're amazing at CSI humor, and should totally do more!