This was really good! Though it did seem a bit rushed most of the time I still really liked it!

"..." .. RusheD! Gah.. *goes out the door and closed it.

Aww, that was cute! Shortish, but cute. I enjoyed it :)

LOL! "Hermione! You're reading yaoi?" "Next thing we know, you'll be eating pocky and cosplaying." HAHAHAHA that was hilarious. I laughed so loudly, my boyfriend looked at me funny. Mmmm pocky. YUM. This was a hilarious chapter. You write really well!

heehee i love this story!

I think it's great, especially for a first fanfic, and I only have two suggestions. 1.) Make it longer - people like reading fics with longer chapters. 2.) Try to explain things more. You can have the element of wonder and surprise with things like what's wrong with draco while at the same time, not having it be as confusing. And maybe by hinting at it again in the next chapter or two, to let the readers know you haven't forgotten about it. :)

Awwww. It was rather sudden though, and there was almost no transition between the running away and the sex scenes. Its like Draco just flipped a switch or somthing and was like 'panic panic panic... oh... kiss... oh bloddy hot... sex' i mean honestly.

It's a shame you didn't continue this story. I enjoyed reading this. Thank you for writing it :)

You're so good at keeping them eveeeeryone in character

loved this, can't wait to read more of your stories! awesome job :)

NAW

that was cute :D

thanks

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emiliexox

Oh! you suck! that was such a cop-out! you just couldn't describe it, could you? :P

I still love you. and now I won't have to kick your ass. I shouldn't complain.

I actually thought this was pretty cute. lol. I love the room of requirement.

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Very very cute!

Lol! Rainbow magic power! Neh, I can totally see Lav being a yaoi fangirl, and Mi a closet one. :)

Love it!

Interesting story.

I like the touch that Fred and George did. Very much in their style. And Hermione a fangirl for yaoi... classic!

Update soon!