Dear Frorthright
That was short, sweet and perfect. I love it. A part of me is sad, because your story is finished even if it is the beginning for Sango and Miroku. Now I need to search for other fanfictions with those two. XD What are you doing to me?! In such a short time, I can't get enough of your words. Off to the next story. XD
Yours Afyarehy

Beautiful

Well done, this was put together quite nicely. The stringing of Sango's inner cords undoubtly plucked the inner cords of many readers.

Sango’s mood has cleared up, and she has pulled closer to Miroku emotionally. Tie back into the absent members of the group… and an example of how Sango is closer to Miroku than before.

The exchange where Sango protests and Miroku counters was superb. The whole story could have been modeled on that!

Thank you for writing, and sharing what you write.

Writing from Sango’s perspective and her moods tie all four chapters together. Singing Miroku was a surprise, and you well sidestepped the trap of describing whether he sang well or not by focusing on the emotional reaction it caused Sango.

Thanks.

I liked how you showed their ties, emotional distance… and hints of more depth; if Sango will allow it. Thank you for taking on the difficulties of writing Miroku in a K rating.

Thanks.

Nice detail in writing the atmosphere, literally and figuratively. You showed Sango’s mood and made me empathize… And Miroku’s behavior definitely makes me curious as to what will happen next. I did note that everyone in the group but Shippo was mentioned.

Thanks.

Aw... That was so sweet! Obon is the festival of the dead, or something like that, right? Miroku is a very nice guy, but I'd never dream of going up against Sango for him *Shudders* Very nice, thank you!

this was quite lovely.

Aw cute story. You're really good at characterizing Sango in your fanfics. )

No two in that entire universe has suffered as much and deserve as much happiness that they could possibly ever receive.

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Congratulations! Your story has been nominated by the Inuyasha FanGuild for [Best Romance - Miroku/Sango] for the Second Quarter of 2009. If you would like to track the progress of your story through the voting process, or simply find out more about the IYFG and perhaps join yourself, you can find everything you need to know on our website: (Inuyasha Fan Guild dot com)

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Third review, third story in less than an hour. I have a problem. I can't help it; your stories are too juicy to give up. Another great one!

very nice. thank you.