Reviews for Crime and Punishment
AriaVampri chapter 28 . 4/6
Beautiful! Love the plot. Love how the characters developed (thought it was very fitting). Just loved it all. Thank you for all the time and effort you put into this story.
laelruin chapter 28 . 4/4
A fantastic story from beginning to end!
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grimmich chapter 1 . 12/7/2017
But that monk was totally asking for it, he literally attacked him first! Actually all of them for the most part attacked him first (mean the village men and the monk) so it was totally provoked he just enjoyed it a little too much...
onjii chapter 25 . 9/12/2017
Sorry, but I can't continue to keep silent...
First you wrote that the Rin was eight years old. You make this funny dialog where Rin and Kagome interact with each other so we could learn the fact. THAN you suddenly make Rin an thirteen years old girl, but ALSO it's only five MONTHS from her last meeting with Kagome.
Ok, you may forgot about the dialog they had have earlier. It's understundable. The story IS long.
But! Now you made Kagome go and play on the piano of all the things!
PIANO!
You know that piano was invented only around the year 1700? You don't read a Wiki? Are you forgot that Kagome jumps in past around 500 years from year 1996?
So no piano at the year 14-something! Only a clavichord!
Why are you tend to forgot to check on the history facts while you write your story? Isn't it the must sensible thing that anyone whold do with his story?
No offence, I love your story, but this little bugs is... they are annoing, really.
Lady Keiko Niwa chapter 1 . 8/14/2017
I think someone pocket dialed a review
Guest chapter 4 . 6/14/2017
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Last Breath chapter 8 . 7/19/2016
Wow damn, now I bet Sesshomaru will come before she gets hurt. But I never expected this side of Hojo, like wow.
Guest chapter 1 . 6/20/2016
I just finished reading your story and wanted to tell you I loved it! Especially the Author's Rants, the whole thing was awesome! Thanks for writing such a good story and having the guts to post it! Thanks!
Undertheskys chapter 27 . 9/30/2015
Damn she wants him to beg for her, and hes gunna do it!?
Undertheskys chapter 13 . 9/30/2015
What did Sesshomaru do with the money he got?
Undertheskys chapter 8 . 9/30/2015
Souta is pushing the wrong button... for "lady Sesshomaru" hahah
Undertheskys chapter 2 . 9/30/2015
Are you sure its waist and not wrist?
Undertheskys chapter 2 . 9/30/2015
Kagome has such a kind heart to always find the good in people
StarKurama chapter 28 . 9/26/2015
that was awesome. loved it. it was funny
SapphireKageKyuura chapter 5 . 4/20/2015
Lmfao Sesshomaru so had this coming! He deserved it for the lives he took. And now he knows how Inuyasha felt every time he got sat into the ground. :P
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