This story was beautifully dark. It was clever, you write that characters perfectly. I can only imagine the look in the doctors eyes when he stoppe that man (oh my I can't remember his name for the life of me, something with a G?) from slapping Rose. This wasn't a happy ending, and that reminded me that that's how some of their trips go. They have to let the timeline continue on and let all ba things happen. The ending really killed me, the irony struck me so hard it hurt. You continue to inspire and amaze me as I read through your stories. Thank you.

That was very sad but also a lovely story. Glad Rosé, Doctor, and the TARDIS were okay though

Well that was depressing...

I want a sequel!xD I absolutely LOVED this part:

The patches of skin on Grodin's face not covered in mud began turning red as his hands balled into fists. Rose watched him defiantly, never dropping her eyes from his glare. When the man's arm raised to slap her, however, it was stopped midway.

"I wouldn't do that if I were you," the Doctor spoke with quiet menace, his fingers wrapped painfully around Grodin's wrist.

too awesome! XD

that was truly brilliant!

my favourite bit was:

When the man’s arm raised to slap her, however, it was stopped midway.

“I wouldn’t do that if I were you,” the Doctor spoke with quiet menace, his fingers wrapped painfully around Grodin’s wrist.

Arine’s husband stared at the Time Lord for only a moment before looking away. “Let me go,” he said, nodding in silent agreement not to attempt that again.

thats was great!made me feel all warm inside!

i really really really look forward to reading your next fic!

Nice work!

Great story with an amazing ending 10/10 from me!

Ah! EPIC! That was brilliant!

A great sad ending to a great story! I love it!

You can't save 'em all, Doctor. :(

Grodin was a meanie tho, Julie. A stupid, foolish meanie. I only wish the others had listened to The Doctoe and Rose. That way, they could have at least not suffered any longer than already. AND...you could have also had a sequel. :D

:: wink :: wink :: nudge :: nudge :: ;)

~your pal,

Sharma :)

a brilliant end to a fabbity-fab story! :D

woop they found the TARDIS i knew they would ;)

them lot are so stubborn lol

all in all a brill story !

cant wait for your next 1 lol

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GROOVILY GRASS AND THRICE BANANA-WORTHY END!

Twas an original, CHEESE, and fabbily imaginative idea and I loved how you concluded it! Only 42? They should've just accepted the offer...

YAYZEE! *high fives wall* Stupid weirdo with a beardo, (I'm guessing... P) trying to hit Rose! Now I'm pitying the woman! But NO FEAR; my crew of ruber ducks are here! They'll sort it all out... HEEHAW!

MARVY STUFFZ!

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Very nice way to end this... They were a stubron lot for sure. Perhaps having to rebuild from scratch willteach them a far better lesson that the doctor helping them... They found the tardis, I was worried she'd be under all that mud...I wonder did he always know where she was in some sense...

Lovely...

I'm not normally a vindictive person, but I can't stand people who can't get off their high horses and accept help. I think they'll be less than 42 around when it comes to it! Giant insects? Yuck!

Another great story! How do you manage those?

*hugs*

Aawh poor rose fainting like that, although fair enough really after what happened i would probably faint if i were her.

Great chapter! I hope they find the TARDIS soon though !

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Lovely... Poor Rose she had a a bit of a shock, don't blamae her a abit for fainting, who wouldn't. Her determination to help these people, she is right they would let pride get in the way. I wonder where that nice blue box is, in the midst of all that mud...

Love it...