I have no problem with you using an idea like that, so long as you reference it. :) Sometimes a good idea is a REALLY good idea! ^_^

You have several spelling and grammar mistakes, a good number in the last few paragraphs, but the story as a whole was good.

Aaw... poor Sasu is worried :( Good thing that Naru probably have promised him to always come back, and he always keep his promises ;D

lol I shall check this series out I love reading so I will probably really love this book...

that was very good, but you should have made the lemon longer

lmao, that has to be cheating, but a very good idea on Naruto's part

man, i can't imagine reading that much, i barely survived reading lord of the rings. oh, not to be a smart alack, but some of ur grammer is off. when you say "i love you, too." it's not two like the number; and there were some other things, but they are easily over looked.

intrusting...I really liked this

Isn't the book you're referring to have a seeker and a confesser and the mor siths and all? It's actually a TV show now called legend of the seeker. Thanks for telling me the book titles I've been looking forever! Great read :)

okay, i have a question about this series. is there any smut in it? XD and what kind of fantasy is it?

OMG! This story was amazing!

I loved it :)

Thanks for the tip for about the series by Terry Goodkind. I'll definately check it out next time I go to borders! In case you haven't already guessed I'm a crazy stong reader too. I've been looking for a new good series to read for awhile now. I haven't found anything since the Twilight saga. Thanks!

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Haha. i read that book. i nly got to the 3rd one, and wizard's first rule was definately my fav.