TA-twinArmageddons 3/21/11 . chapter 1I lurve dis shiznit! |
train to greenwich 1/21/11 . chapter 1When I read this, I, much to my disbelief, was not killed by Sue-ness. Very nice job with your OC. May I suggest a different name, however? I, personally, associate the name Rogue with the iconic X-men character... Putsa a face on the character that doesn't apply in this fic. |
Deathcomessoon 1/11/11 . chapter 1This is so cute! I really liked it. :) |
Cabrini6000 6/26/10 . chapter 1This was awesome. I really like how you made Rogue. And by the way...all the songs you choose for the playlist.. ROCKED! |
HasLostAndCantBeFound 1/11/10 . chapter 1Usheshisha~
I must say at first i thought this was just gonna be another boring mary sue-ish story but suprisingly it wasnt!~
i normally dont write reviews or add stories to my fav but this has to be added!~
I liked it for the most part, the ending seemed a bit off for Matt but hes a unknown character i suppose(i would imagine he'd admit liking someone quickly tho)~
i so expected her to run and not look back but the ending was definitally a suprise~
over all tho, its writen well, the characters are in character specailly melloXD, and the idea was good~
ill definatly be recommending this story to people~
Lady Hyena-Chan~ |
Rachie-girl 11/2/09 . chapter 1OMG I LOVE THIS STORY!
It's so sweet! And I finally found one that wasn't total Yaoi with Matt&Mello; or Matt&Near; or the ever elusive Matt&L.;
This story is so freaking amazing! I love you for writing this!
Oh, and btw, I'm not the creater of this account. My friend, Rachie-girl, got grounded for getting a D in math and she can't go on until she gets the grade back up (and I'm pretty sure that might take a while). So I'm taking over for the time being.
Sammy123~ |
The . L O S T . Paperclip 9/10/09 . chapter 1This was great :) |
8/16/09 . chapter 1 Aw, this is cute and deserves three 'double-u's, not the two that I originally stopped at. It's nice that they can all be together and stuff like that and I like how this character developed even without much of a past, mysterious eh wot? Especially like Mello being a he-she monster. You know he's really girl transvestite. She just hasn't gotten the work done downstairs because really, what guy would wear pants like his? Whatevs, sleep now. Bye. |
Alex Sakura Reed 8/14/09 . chapter 1Aw, how cute! |
aswickedasyouare 8/4/09 . chapter 1aw... sososo sweet! |
MissehKeehl 7/30/09 . chapter 1Okay, I am absolutely in LOVE with this story. It's so sweet, and extremely well written. I can't wait for the next update! xD |
7/16/09 . chapter 1 You had so much going for you when you started out, but the idea of hooking up with Matt got the better of you. Leaving would be the best way to end this, in my opinion. In addition, I wonder at the character's name. If it's her real name, then that's...a bit strange. If it's not, then she truly has no reason to stay. You had, I will reiterate, so much good raw material in the beginning, but the ending played out in an unrealistic way. Why would this one guy be any different from all the others? I may just be an angst whore, or I may myself be too afraid of attachment to understand, but the end just sort of killed it for me. |
paramore-danish 7/10/09 . chapter 1Aww...very cute. =] You're good at coming up with unique backstories for your OCs, rather than using the common they-know-each-other-from-Wammys-House. I thought Matt and Mello were both nicely in-character. Good job! |