| Reviews for Lily Luna Potter : The New Silver Trio |
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  Guest chapter 3 . 4/1/2015 acest fanfic mai este continuat? |
| Elizabeth chapter 1 . 2/19/2013 I'me OBSESED with Harry Potter and this is awesome plz make a movie about this and I could be in it but i only look like hermione but im 11 in April 2013 so i could be Lilly I meen they make alot of stuff like annabeth having brown hair in the movie so plz its gonna be awesome i hope someday i meet you in real life somday well hope to see ur book in stors soon c ya |
| Guest chapter 1 . 10/21/2012 Cool part 2 pleeeeeeeeeeeeeeeease |
| hi chapter 3 . 8/6/2012 please continue |
| Guest chapter 3 . 7/19/2012 Is there gonna be a next chapter? PLEASEEE? :3 |
| lremick chapter 3 . 12/18/2011 why would anyone put a pottter in that house they are goog people |
| jenna chapter 1 . 10/2/2011 Roxanne is the YOUNGEST child of George and Angelina Weasley! |
 Countess of Western March chapter 3 . 7/17/2011 Update soon Please! I am really loving this! :D best wishes, CWM |
| Sunny writes love chapter 3 . 8/12/2010 awww please update soon :) please? |
| daughterofposideon12 chapter 3 . 8/4/2010 wrirte this is good its been a month just type it alraedy. oh have you read lily potters first year thats my book.i love your book so countunie to update your story positive potter |
| alwaysrunningplaces chapter 3 . 7/5/2010 yay! I love a good lily in slytherin(sp?) story! |
| bells-mannequin chapter 3 . 7/5/2010 nice chapter! i liked the sorting scenes very much and am looking forward to the next chapter - especially Harry's answer. hope you'll update soon :D |
| Sirius. Seriously chapter 2 . 4/7/2010 This was a brilliant story! It gave me a much wider view of what life may have been like with the Potters. I myself am a huge fan of Harry Potter, so I was extreemly excited to find someone else who knew what they were writing about. I don't think that there is much else I could give you for feed back, but I do have some little things. 1. You don't need to say everybody's full names such as when Harry intorduced his family, "Lily Luna Potter", 'Ginvera Potter' ect. Because they would just be known as Lily or Ginny to him, but I did like how you used their ful names when they were in trouble. 2. I loved how you introduced all of her cousins, but it didn't need as much detail, it was lovely to find out extra information though. AND thats is pretty much all I have to say! It was written beutifully, and I request that you write another chapter. I recommend that you send the first two chapters to J.K Rowling, surely you could make a deal! I hope this becomes use to you, and that you write another chapter soon. |
| anonymous chapter 2 . 4/6/2010 Great chapter! Update soon! c: |
| soccersyd chapter 2 . 1/14/2010 so far so good :) |