| Reviews for Magical Girl Nanoha 12? |
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| chapter 1 . 6/23 Good chapter I like the freandship there building. You know every time ranma said girls are weaker, the more I want to threw him into spring of drowned girl, or see his reaction when all the view his father drilled into him is washed away when fate and nanoha get into serious combat. My only concerned is ranma being able to help. Sheer ranma at the age of ten my be strong enough to help handle the weaker monsters. However, with his training trip only at the halfway point and not knowing any of his major attacks he would be easily overwhelmed by the beaker monsters, the dog, and fate. The best ranma can do right now when the level of the fights goes up is to either act as emotional support, or give nanoha battle advice and Basic training in hand to hand combate and ki manipulation. Unless he can figure out how to go into the Nico ken when he needs to, and not harm his friends, or gets his father to teach him the umisankin and its sister style. |
| tarrangar chapter 13 . 5/31 So the Amazons for once got what they deserve I see, a shame they managed to fake the reports, so they didn't catch the flak they deserve diplomatically. |
| tarrangar chapter 3 . 5/31 I really hate that people just go along with a foreign power saying they will be drafting Nanoha. Yeah I know that's canon and all, but I still hate the TSAB's arrogance, in treating people not of their nation, nor in their nation, as beholden to their laws. |
| Lerris chapter 16 . 5/20 This is a good story. Worst case, if you wanted to call it done, you could add a paragraph or two where they get together to head out to another unspecified mission together as the scene fades. Of course if you wanted to write more, that works too, as I said, this is a good story... |
| RoseBloodmane chapter 1 . 3/29 Lol his magic level is rated D. Haha she's better then you. How you like that? Girls can do anything a boy can do so that who thing about being better then Nanoha is stupid. |
| Grey Sanders chapter 16 . 2/18 I was fun, I enjoy it and I wish you could do some more... and Ranma should get a threesome marrige at least with Fate and Nanoha, but if Sigmud, and Vita want to join too... |
| SixPerfections chapter 16 . 1/12 It’s been years.. but still. This was a fun ride. My only regret is that Ranma didn’t end up with even a bit of romance towards either/both fate plus Nanoha. Also your Pervy Nanoha was simply brilliant. Thanks :) |
| SixPerfections chapter 4 . 1/9 That was really really cute. :) |
| Armiture chapter 1 . 11/22/2017 I like it. Don't know much about the Nanoha series but they are really cute together. |
| WillItWork chapter 16 . 2/13/2017 Well, so this is where it ends. The past few chapters looked like you were losing steam, but I've really liked the storytelling and quality — enough so that I could ignore the consistent typoes. A pretty good soft ending, and much fun had by all. Thanks for sharing. |
| WillItWork chapter 15 . 2/13/2017 I've really liked the Ranma arc. It has great fusion flavour, and very well pulls in both the motivations of the Nanoha set, and your own previously established setup. I'm looking forward to the next chapter. |
| WillItWork chapter 10 . 2/13/2017 I really liked the Nanoha-centric earlier section, and I also like this post-timeskip fusion. Some things seem strange though — it's supposedly 10 years, but did StrikerS just not happen? I'm assuming Jusenkyo is the magical curses, and we've seen how that turns out. Overall, this has been a fun read! |
| Ranmaleopard chapter 16 . 1/14/2017 My god this is just really interesting and amazing and I can't wait for more. Please continue |
| KingSora3 chapter 16 . 11/24/2016 I enjoyed it very much! Please continue this amazing fanfic |
| KingSora3 chapter 15 . 11/24/2016 Alright! |