no! why! it is a beautiful story! wait to remove it! you may will overcome your block!

Oh, that's awful! :(

I think if you decide you'd rather discontinue the story, just write a little note and end it there, saying that there won't be anymore, at least not for an extremely long time, but don't delete it completely! I enjoy reading it over and over again! You should also leave it up b/c maybe some day someone will be able to come up with a solution to finishing this up properly, without giving up on it. At least leave it up for the rest of us to indulge in every now and again. Please? I love this one so much, I'd hate to see it gone forever. D:

-jelliclesoul635

First of all, I must say that I love the family tree you set up. One of the most difficult things about writing for CATS is that the only information we get about the characters is through their interactions with others. I love that you made Quaxo Munkustrap's son, and the relationship between Tugger and his son is hilarious. Excellent story.

i love this story. i feel so sorry for Cori and Tanto now!

I'm so glad you've updated! Hope things will get better for you :)

I like this background history of Munkustrap and Demeter, since it didn't go all "perfectly" and ideally; it was realistic, but romantic. And quite heart-rending with the parts of Coricopat and Tantomile.

Coontinue when you can :D

Aw! I love the story of the Jellicle Ball with Demeter and Munkustrap. I absolutely loved it! And Jemima’s interest in the subject made it even sweeter.

I think that’s the best part of the story yet, and that’s mostly because I’m a huge romance sap when it comes to those two destined companions. xD

Wonderful chapter, it was completely fantastic! Update soon…

-jelliclesoul635

I wanted to wait with a review until I read all available chapters.

I really enjoyed your characterisations and the two different timelines. Well-written, interesting, witty, it's just a joy to read. I hope you can update soon.

great fic

and i love how Munks and Tugger act with each other

but you need to use the title flashback when you are going in the past

cause it was a but confusing

loved the idea that Griz taught Demeter a dance

keep going

Ok, here’s my review…

I thought it was perfect . . . that’s it.

There’s nothing I can pick on because you executed this chapter exceptionally well. As usual, awesome job and I will be waiting patiently for the next chapter. ;)

-jelliclesoul635

It's quite engaging, I want to see where this is going :D I can't wait for this to be continued! And I like your family trees, gave me a few new viewpoints on who's with whom.

I love your story so far. It's well written, and the plot is well thought out. I loved the sneezing, and the Skin-Bald Flanker. That made me laugh almost hysterically. Please, do continue to spin this wonderful tale. :D

Well now, R2v3n Kn1ght, all I have to type is keep going! I found Mungojerrie pretending to be Rumpleteazer the cutest moment of them all! =D

Never stop writing.

-jelliclesoul635

To R4v3n Kn1ght: You are Welcome :) Thanks for well... thanking me by putting it in your chapter, and its ok the story is so worth the wait and Ive been there before :)

and aw pounce in this chapter is so cute and more grown up :D. I luv the part with Mungo pretending to be teaser it made me laugh

Your writing style is lovely! I watched Cats the other day and came looking for some fanfiction, and happened to stumble upon yours. I'm hooked! :)

Woah... You're really good at this! I just love what you've done with the characters and very clever relationships with each other. Please keep going, it would be really great to read more!