Hi, I love your story, your characters were right on the mark with the original character's personalities.

You did a great job with this, it's going on my list of favorites!

Also, I'd just like to say that I disagree with kathy lee. I love seme Ed. With his personality type (doesn't like to lose or appear vulnerable) I think it suits him.

I don't like how some fan girls discriminate gay relationships based on height and age.

I myself, who as a gay man have been dating an older boyfriend for the past five years who is also taller than I am. Me being 5'10" and him 6'3" and I am the one who is usually on top in our relationship. (He tried it once and didn't like it.)

Though most of the couples that I know like to switch at times.

And also, just because someone is older doesn't necessarily mean they are more experienced, even though it's true in this case.

Beh, I just had to say my piece because I've read so many comments like that.

Don't get me wrong though, everyone is entitled to their opinion and I respect her right to voice hers.

I think that you are doing a marvelous job with this story and I think that whatever you decide to do with the sequel, if you decide to write one, will be wonderful. :)

I think, for sure, that this is my favorite and best fic I've read. Well, about Ed and Roy together. There MUST be a sequel becaue it seems, to me, uncomplete unless I find out what Ed plans. So PLEASE have a sequel.

oh i loved this fic ^_^

oh man i would have freaked in ed's situation, in his earlier situation at least

Ok. Gotta say... I liked it. Like the fact that they were escaping from the cold. That Ed got hurt. That Roy went out of his way to protect him, that they ended up cold and desperate and eventaully ended up doing... fun stuff. :D

But what i DIDN'T LIKE. And didn't like VERY MUCH. Was that it seemed like Edward was the top one...

I hate it whenever they portry Edward as the agressive one cause since Roy is; older, taller, has more experiance, is a man while Ed is a boy; I feel that he should be more agressive then Edward. I hope you do so in the next chapter... Cause as cool as it REALLY WAS, the whole Ed seme-ish thing threw off the whole thing for me. -_-

Frozen has to be one of the best fanfictions I've ever read. I really hope you post the 2nd chapter soon, I look forward to it!

This is one of my very favourite fics on the kink meme, fantastic stuff! Love the interaction between them and the very forceful Edward too, I love it when he takes charge. I had no idea it was written by the person who wrote Rusted Dawn, which I just this moment caught up with too :D

wow. just wow lol that was great! sequel!

*drools* loved it! i love how you wrote this out, and you have to write a sequel of when they get to the outpost! please?

I know this was supposed to be a oneshot... but could you make a sequel, pretty please? I'll give you raspberry cheesecake! This story was very interesting, and I just love the sense of attraction and challenge that is conveyed here. In addition, your characterization of Ed and Roy are pretty much spot on. Great job!