Interesting...

Sad it isn't a little longer, though. You could make it work.

Ooh, I like this.

I've read it at livejournal and I'm so glad I've found it here, because I don't have an lj account and I so need to tell you how beautiful this is.

I love the pairing, the implications, the idea/plot, and, of course, the writing.

Favourite line: Last night - all the nights - were difficult.

Perfect!

I really enjoyed it! It's hard to believe it's your first LOST story. I love the way you depicted the characters - such detail. I found myself pitying Esau and wanting to laugh at the same time. Poor, conflicted guy...