Poe is an interesting choice. I always liked Annabel Lee. Probably one of the few poems I read in high school that left a lasting impression (that wasn't boredom:)

Poor Hatori.

I saw that same description "tragically beautiful" used for Akito once in another story I read and it's always stuck in my head for some reason.

I hope things get better soon, though I'll have to admit that pretty much everything on Akito is sad.

Heh heh, "zombie" seems was not a word I was expecting, but quite suitable:) And talk about a fine line between being upset and insane.

I wonder what'll happen next?

I really felt sorry for Akito. At least now the two are together. Good story. =D

Beautiful, absolutelty beautiful - and i loved the use of poetry to enhance it ^_^

PLease keep writing ^_^

Aw - such a sad chapter!

Poor Akkii! ^^

You are a really talented writer to be able to show all this in your stories.

Please update soon ^^

Aw - this story is so cute ^^

The HatorixAkito relationship has been written so so well and I hope you continue this great fanfic!

Eternal Sunshine of the Spotless Mind, with Jim Carrey. That, was an excellant movie, it's on my list of all time favorites list, I look forwarding to seeing in many ways the fic go with the title. About the fic now, I like it, it's good, but it's a tad fast paced. Try slowing the progression of things down a bit?

I too, have difficultly with the Akito spoiler. This was short, but interesting, poor Aki...