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xXxOtAkU-444xXx
9/14/09 . chapter 2
I like it! *^^*
Inumaru12
9/14/09 . chapter 2
Yay, theres another chapter! ^w^ I love it.
Kyuubiluver
9/14/09 . chapter 2
Dude, THIS WOULD BE AN AWESOME IDEA FOR A FF! U should so try writing one like this after this drabble thing is over
Mask of Lies
9/14/09 . chapter 2
does Harry still have his magic? and if he does, do you think he could charm Integra so that anything she wears truns into a really feminan(sp?) dress or something? she would be pissed:cackles:
peruser
9/14/09 . chapter 2
Alucard makes trouble to entertain himself. With Harry, son of the Marauders and prankster himself, as a mate Alucard is bound to find or make quadruple amounts of trouble! If this is turning into a full out story, I can't wait to see the two take on the Wizarding World!
Deviously Ruined Rose
9/14/09 . chapter 2
≧∀≦ yays for your drabbles they are awesomeness!
KounetsuDeb
9/14/09 . chapter 2
*SNICKER*

That is the best summary I can give about my feelings on this chapter. Great job.
Neellok
9/11/09 . chapter 1
-grins-

I love how Alucard calls Harry a kitten. So cute!
Ell Roche
9/10/09 . chapter 1
This is so adorable! The thought of little kitten Harry, even when he's alone like that, makes for interesting reading. Really, it does! And you're making me even more interested in this 'Alucard' character. I might have to check out the anime he's from to get a better feel for him.

A few things:

...and going back... going should be 'went' here.

...a bug struggling to stay on a lead... lead should be 'leaf' here.

The triple hyphen "-" should only be a double. "-"

I don't know if this is Alucard's speech pattern or not, so if it is forgive me, but ...I had just found me a stray... me should be 'myself'.

Other than that this was really well written. You did an especially good job describing how Harry was sitting like a cat.

As always, I look forward to seeing what you come up with next!

-Kay
Mireya Humbolt
9/9/09 . chapter 1
Me gusto mucho. Muchas felicidades, escribe pronto otro de esa preja me encanta como la manejas.

Felicidades¡

Mireya
xXxOtAkU-444xXx
9/9/09 . chapter 1
I like it! *^^*
TheOneThatIsAddictedToHPfics
9/9/09 . chapter 1
cute!
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