Reviews for Temptation
WereBunny87 chapter 1 . 5/3/2011
Awwww...unrequited love is so sad :(...good job!
AnimeIceFox chapter 1 . 12/23/2010
Poor Sirius! But good work though! _
Rice-Ball247 chapter 1 . 12/20/2009
except for Draco!

*cheers*

lol wow that was powerful. I likey!
Neellok chapter 1 . 9/18/2009
Omg!

And I thought I was evil! Damnit Sin, you are evil personified!

That was so fucking sad, I cried. Damnit.

-huggles Sirius-

I'm so favoriting this piece. Great job Hun.
Ellory chapter 1 . 9/15/2009
This was a very powerful drabble. Wow! You totally drew me in. I could feel Harry's excitement at getting married and Sirius's pain for the same reason, and it made it all the more realistic. It was so . . . painfully honest. Great job!

A few things:

heart is first word: Pa'foo. - hear his

spreed out before - spread

walked up the isle. - aisle, isle is like the island

pulling Harry way - away

Sixty second - seconds

Very nice job,

~Kay
TheOneThatIsAddictedToHPfics chapter 1 . 9/15/2009
loved it! poor Sirius!
SbwTrish chapter 1 . 9/15/2009
That was gorgeous. Nicely done.