| Reviews for The Transfer |
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archy12 chapter 73 . 10/22 It's the perfect end for them, considering their age and the years in front of them before they think of marriage. :) I had never imagined reading such a long fanfic, that too a complete one, but your stories are easy to read. One never gets bored or feels heavy or that things are dragging on! Thank you for writing this! |
archy12 chapter 72 . 10/22 That's the spirit, Billy! It sounds like the perfect holiday week. Friends and families together, enjoying themselves and having a good time! |
archy12 chapter 71 . 10/22 Anthuriums are really funny, but I can see why they would appeal to Emmett. :D Bella almost falling off the bed reminds me of a scene in 'Counterpoint' by SleepyValentina. Edward was living in a college dorm and Bella had come to visit him. (Conjugal visit, haha.) His bed was like a bunk bed and the upper one, and while they were 'doing it', Bella hit her head on the ceiling. Pretty hard, evidently, for Edward got worried enough to call his father (a doctor) for medical advice. :P |
archy12 chapter 70 . 10/22 Those entries in the diary were so moving. It was a god idea for Edward to let Bella read them. Ha, I knew that 'mor 5ek' would spring up somewhere! :D |
archy12 chapter 69 . 10/22 That was fun, facing the inquisition to dancing to explaining Emmett that the French phrase came off a shampoo bottle. This is good winding up! I noticed that this story had relatively more details in the sex scenes compared to the others. Did you feel it wasn't necessary, once you had written them in this story? I am okay either way, just curious. |
archy12 chapter 68 . 10/22 Good to see all the misunderstanding has been resolved! |
archy12 chapter 67 . 10/21 Ah, Edward finally confessed what was bothering him. And he went to talk with Bella. Now let us see what he comes up with to have her forgiveness. :) |
archy12 chapter 66 . 10/21 So now Charlie has met everyone. And yes, spending time with Alice would exhaust him. :) |
archy12 chapter 65 . 10/21 That was really horrible, it's understandable that Edward withdrew from everything and everyone in the school. God, he was so young! No wonder he had nightmares. Even an older person would have taken it hard. Of course he is upset now, it will take him some time to understand it wasn't his fault that Bella was attacked. His family and friends will help him. |
archy12 chapter 64 . 10/21 I don't think James injured her with the knife. Maybe the blood was from her mouth? At least, I hope so. |
archy12 chapter 63 . 10/21 Yeah, there was no need to call James, though it didn't do any harm I think. We know he is delusional. Sad that the idyllic weekend had to end! |
archy12 chapter 62 . 10/21 O-oh, that was what he was thinking of when he looked at the calendar. I wondered. It was a truly memorable evening...and night. And now it's time to return to the real world. Sigh. |
archy12 chapter 61 . 10/20 Haha, this song is insane! :D Oh, very unique use of "Don't move" in the previous chapter. ;) Earlier I was worried they would (or one of them would) fall asleep with all the hard work of the day, but thankfully that didn't happen! |
archy12 chapter 60 . 10/20 It was, it was the right mix, perfect for those two! I had an inkling that Edward wouldn't go too far from his house. I hadn't thought of the pool house though. That was a good idea, much better than a hotel. |
archy12 chapter 58 . 10/20 Yes, it went okay, really okay. No doubt Nessie being Jake's love interest had a lot to do with his mellow mood! |