I don't think it's OOC in the least to be honest with you and i've read this first chapter a month ago- waiting patiently for another chapter - and couldn't help but want to read it again. I BEG OF YOU! CONTINUE IT PLEEEEEEEEASE! .

Honestly, I thought it was sweet. They weren't THAT OOC. I enjoyed it. Please update soon =D

I came across this paring completely by accident, but I've found that I actually like them a lot. I love this fic to, it was awesome!

Good job.

OOOooooooohhhhhHHHHHHH there HAS to be a second chapter to this!

if not write one! pleaseeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee! i will love you 4eva if you do!

I really like this pairing (Nnoitra/Grimmjow), and I wonder why there isn't more fic of them? They're a damn good pairing!

I really like this fic, I never thought of that as a punishment, but I could see it. Especially Ulquiorra's whole dialogue about doing because Aizen asked.

And aw at Grimmjow's crush on Nnoitra, and Nnoitra caring about him 3

it is the second time i have ever seen Nnoitra and JAEGERJAQUEZ as a couple. Not a big fan of it but eh. A little bland and OOC. I would think grimmjow would of fought back anyways, oh well. I will read the next chapter once it is out.

Interesting, this pairing is indeed very rare and I'm curious to see how it will develop.

I hope you will write more for this story soon!

Although I truly appreciate your contribution to such a rare pairing -and would certainly like to read more NnoiGrimm- however I feel I've to be honestly frank with you that the overall fic feels somewhat bland (probably because the way you write is like a written comic script than anything else) and the way you decipher Grimmjow's point of view feels monotone/robotic as well as OOC (including Nnoitra) at some levels.

Oh, and one thing: It's JAEGERJAQUEZ not Jaggerjack.