I wanted her to date Dave so badly because I'm such a big Klare fan! I've always liked Denna and this story seems perfect so far! Please continue!

I love love LOVE it already plz plz PLZ plz PLZ update it's so cute _

Damn Dave is a beast! As for Jenna, from what I've read and you've written, she love the chase and challenge too much to change. As you've watched on TV, Jenna went with Dave to the carnival out of pity, with Dave being oblivious to that. Jenna isn't completely evil though, offering Dave the chance to keep his rep. Maybe they will try again later.

Oh! Great start! Congrats on your first fanfiction! This would be a great way to keep Jenna away from KC. Plus I love UCs! Can't wait for more

As someone who has to wait a few more days to see Jenna and Dave come to cannon I still was simply drawn to this piece by my obsession of UC shippings. I must say that from this teaser I can totaly jump on the Dave/Jenna train ! great start to your first piece