Hot fucking DAMN, this story was amazing!

Oh My Gosh! I love your writing!
You're able to bring an incredible level of depth to these characters and create such terrifying situations. Your writing reminds me of that of James Patterson.

Holy shit this was a long ass story. But I really enjoyed it. :)

so you left it at a cliff hanger and are now canceling the entire thing?

Fantastic story!

WOW!

ah. so thats how bolt got his powers.
i didn't know that calico was penny's dad's boss

I wonder if brady had something to do with bolt's dissapearence

awww . so thats how bolt and penny met

This was, indubitably, the best Bolt fanfiction story I have ever read. However, I feel as though there were some unnecessary information that was repeatedly told throughout the 62 chapters that I have spent my time reading and analyzing.

We know how characters feel just by what they say or do, so i find it unnecessary to tell the viewer how a certain character is feeling by having a mini paragraph explaining it when they have already experienced it. Maybe every once in a while is fine for major plot points, but for a majority of the story it was difficult to read.

For example:

"I passed my exam! hurray!"

Ernest had passed his exam! He could not believe it. Although he had studied long and hard for this moment, he could not help but think what could have happened if he had not studied for this test.

The exclamation alone tells the readers that Ernest is excited for passing his test because of his hard work with a possible hint that this is the first test he had passed.

Just a bit of advice that you can examine yourself if you want to or not.

Anyway, the entire plot for this story was acceptable and interesting. You certainty had a lot of thought gone into this. However, this story does have some common cliches that seem to drag it down sometimes but they do little to stop the story from going.

Interesting blend with the scenes from the movie, you made it seem more acceptable for an actual episode than just rushed material to save money.

I do feel as though Calico could of had more development: Like a hobby or past-time. A human is a human after all, regardless of how evil they are.

Penny has a lot of development in this story: she's strong, but is dependent on bolt and her father. She's arrogant at times and sometimes denies situations in the story, which makes her character more believable because of her age.

I don't think Mittens should have been in this story, it just makes the overall feel of a true show dedicated to bolt seem unrealistic, but that does not mean she made a great character to appose bolt and then stay by his side, even though it's a cliche and the obvious mirror to the movie's plot for these two characters.

The action depicted in the story was wonderful and creative. However, I do feel as though the henchmen in this story are a little too predictable. Why would Calico hire some douches to be his guards? I do think the bad guys should of had their side of development, their training, experiences, ex.

Overall, I enjoyed this story. I do think this story is the answer to the questions going around: like if Bolt was an actual show for teens and adults.

I praise this story for it's superior story and semi-realistic view on things. Thank you for making such a wonderful story.

Damn Chaos (which is also my rap name, how awesome lol) you sure do know how to make a story shine, I love it. The grammer, editing and spelling were beyond anything I have read before on this site and i'm glad to say that I'm really truely proud we have writers such as you. Il oved the part when Bolt fought against his inner demons, but did not like it when he won and forgot about them...thinking himself the hero when when there are just far to many of them. I really hope you keep with this story or atleast put different enemies in them (because I REALLY HATE main villians!), anyway i'm proud to have read the whole story and really, honesty cannot get enough of the legendary Super-dog. If yuo ever need any help, ideas or advice, I got your back bro, I myself am an author and have been writing for six years so I can help (i'm 19 by the way) altought to be honest I'm not that great with editing.

I got yuor back nonetheless bro, peace and may the Greek and Roman godsbe with and watch over you (if you show them proper respect and worship, man) peace.

I have taken a break from commanding the anglo isles air forces to tell youabout your writing. I have enjoyed reading this in my personal fighter. My only negative is the brief use of bad language. Was it neccesary. otherwise, good as ever.

You might have noticed that lord ferrok has been on fanfic while not conquering the world. I am rewriting this in a transformers style. whats youre opinion?

This is wonderfully done i wish the movie was like this.

I had to stop at chapter 2 because it's so long. I must admit since I watched the movie, I don't really want to read it. It's very good so far, though. It's just that...I'm not really into these kind of stories. Especially stories with animals in them, because it's hard to picture them doing stuff. But that's only MY opinion. You can have your own. I'm just giving some advice. :)