great story :)

I loved this story keep up with the stories ur an awesome writer

Wow, that was great! Very sweet and sexy at the same time, and you kept Yusuke and Keiko in character almost perfectly. I found out that it DOES snow in Japan (which actually surprised me) so the snow-covered setting is entirely plausible. Liked the whole "fever" thing, too, even if Yusuke's sick now. XD Overall, great job, and keep up the good work!

i really loved it. Hot and fevery. Awesome one shot. You should write more. And congrats for this story.

you did a good job making steamy and sweet melt together perfectly. loved it!

I love how in character Yusuke, Keiko, and Shizuru were. LOL I loved how badass met badass when Yusuke answered Shizuru at the door. _ Loved the romantic bits. I have to admit that I skipped through the M parts, but the conversation between Yusuke and Keiko were more than good enough. Thank you for posting this, and I hope you write more YuKei stories!

The fic was great, and I thought that you captured every character perfectly! I thought it was sweet of Yusuke to visit Keiko when she had a fever like that, and I also thought it was funny how he "expressed his feelings" for her. XD. This is one of the better Yusuke-Keiko oneshots out there, and it's definitely going in my favorites! I love this story and I really think you should keep on writing!

P.S.- I though the fever thing was clever, too. ;).

it was short, sweet, and tasteful. Not too many details, but gave enough to kinda understand what the characters were going through

Yay! I liked this a lot! i think both yusuke and Keiko were very well represented!

I just have two critcs, very small ones, don't worry!

1- You made Yusuke joking about Keiko not wearing a bra and when he removed her shirt she was wearing a bra XD uahuahauhauahauhaua it was contradictory XD

2- I don't think not being married would be a motive for Yusuke not to have sex with Keiko, all the other excuses he gave were fine.

Besides these two critcs I have to say that I think it was very cute the sick thing

Congratulations!

I always wondered why there wasn't more YusukexKeiko fanfiction on here.. you did a wonderful job expressing their passion and stayed mostly in character. Keep up the awesome work :]

I did like it...and some parts were a little OOC (from what I can remember from the series) but it was really nice. And they can act a little differently *behind closed doors* lol )

I loved it! Wish there were more stories like this for Keiko and Yusuke. I love these two a lot! Please keep them coming! :-)

I have to admit to being shocked on this.

I wasn't expecting much, I'm going to be honest. But I actually really really like this oneshot. I really do. Yes there are parts that feel a little OOC, but like you said, you haven't seen it in awhile and it honestly isn't bad! It's pretty dang awesome. Sadly I too noticed the lack of M-rated material on these two and I wish to express thanks to you for writing this. I will say though through the whole thing I was blushing. It was adorable and I think you're pretty good. Thank you and please keep writing!

~ChibiRaccoon