oh, Palpy walked into a traaaaap.

i find myself torn with story.

i like the obidala thing going but i'm really disliking that you've pretty much turned obi into qui-gon when it comes to anything that doesn't concern padme.

you pretty much copy his qui's dialogue into obi's responses, then have him acting like qui-gon, etc.

I'v been gone, so I haven't reviewed... sorry. I just read from chap. 33, and honestly... This still remains my favorite, not to mention the best story on FF. You trully are and amazing writer. The only thing I would bemoan, is the lack of lemons... But oh well, this story is abso-freaking-lutely, freaking-tassticly, amazing! Please update soon!

-LordChironIII

Yea, The Alliance to Restore The Republic has begun. Wonder if History will be the same this time around.

OH man so awesome thing are looking good

Lovely chapter that explores the second generation Star Wars characters. Obi-Wan's and Padmé's, as well as Bail's and Breha's children, are all growing up into responsible, upright youths. Interesting meeting with Han Solo here - while Han's background here is definitely not as sketchy as in SW canon, I'm sure his time undercover has exposed him to a side of the Empire that the other children have been protected from so far.

Very interesting, yet realistic take on Obi-Wan's reaction as a father to Han's interest in Leia. I would have expected a father to be more protective of his fourteen-year-old daughter, regardless of how trustworthy others deemed the suitor to be, but it's certainly true that the fact that Obi-Wan first met Padmé when the two were the ages that Han and Leia are at now would make him more understanding of the situation.

I fervently hope that this won't be the last meeting at which one of the people at this dinner turns up! Though, those gathered there surely acknowledge that this is a possibility. Looking forward to seeing what happens to each of these brave characters! :)

Awesome Fic!

Please update soon!

Good luck Mara.

Oh, what an interesting twist - Mara as Bail's daughter, and becoming Palpatine's apprentice as an undercover agent! Though, that would imply that this Mara is quite a bit older than Luke...

I wonder how the twins are doing, in the meantime?

Lovely update! :)

WOW MARA

Nice story so far. Took me a couple days to get through it but I'm glad I did. Nice job.

Great story! I've had fun getting this far!

hmmm...

The pragmatic realist in me sees the need for Padme to apparently work for the Empire, but the romanticist in me doesn't like it...

Good work as always.

Wow, how do you keep doing it? A fabulous continuation, for between Episode 3 and Four! I love it!

Congratulations on the anniversary of your website, Daniella! :)

A lovely summary of what has happened in the four years since the formation of the Empire. I like your idea that the Alliance would have been involved in sabotaging the construction of the Death Star from the very beginning - it is certainly the sort of thing that those fighting for liberty would not hesitate to do. Your description of Obi-Wan coming to accept that he was not responsible for Anakin's downfall was also wonderfully written - it's just like Obi-Wan to assume all the responsibility for himself, indeed. Ironically, a rude awakening of this sort might have been exactly what Anakin needed in canon - but of course it never happened, because everybody chose to tiptoe around the Chosen One...

As usual, your wording is simply beautiful - I especially liked the opening scene with Padmé taking a shower, as well as the ending part where Padmé and Obi-Wan mourn that their time with each other is unfortunately limited. "Forever would not be long enough" - how apt!

Great work! :)