This was cute. Not a word I suppose usually associated with sex but it was nonetheless. : ) That last line though from Jareth made me laugh. Fun read.

I really enjoyed reading this story about I think you wrote the characters brilliantly great job.

Oh Jareth, couldn't wait to talk about the hair till later, huh? Haha. Anyway, good story.

Aww! This was so sweet! And I loved how you ended it! XD

I can't help but chuckle. Need to talk about iher/i hair. It sounded like fine Goblin Queen hair to go with his Goblin King hair to me!

Awesome. Of all the things he would why the hair. Hehehe

the ending was awsome lmao

That was great!

ROFL Funny ending! :D

Bwahaha!

Only Jareth would say something about her hair just after a passionate bout of lovemaking...

And after that, all he can think of is her hair...

Way cool story. Nice, short and to the point. Maybe a little more description of setting would have been nice...or a comment from Sarah to "lock the door" to his kingdom so to speak. I mean, anybody could come back from the interrupted party at any time right? Hehehe, but it was an enjoyable read.

Aw, and hot, and LOL. Yep, I think that pretty much sums it up- fun and thanks for sharing ;)

the last line was the best!

“Um, Precious, we need to talk about your hair…”

lol overall great story! i enjoyed it seriously! it has a better plot and clearer dialogue than most other fan fictions!

this is a very nice story. there were a few peices i had to place differnt words to make it sound right but you said it was only beta'd for grammer so its fine. but overall it was a great story. it gave good laughs and very nice 'aw' moments. overall it was great and i wouldent change a thing