This is really good! Usually I don’t read H/P since it’s just not my pairing, but for the CMFFA I made an exception. I wasn’t disappointed, this story is absolutely worthy of the nomination and I wish you good luck for the competition.

I love your idea of writing one shots exploring how the Hotch/Prentiss relationship could develop along the episodes, because some of those scenes are screaming for a post ep/missing scene fic. So keep the chapters coming!

I think the first chapter is a great start, because you wrote a really good characterization of Emily and the Hotch/Prenttis relationship. I'm totally intrigued with how you will continue.

I can't wait for more; you have a really good writing style.

Very well written and in character. I hope for more stories from you.