Um. New Orleans is in Louisiana.

Bummer, this was a cool story too. I have one request though. It's too not delete this story for the pure fact that you'll never finish. I know a lot of authers that one they've given up a story they delete it.

Do what you do, and have fun doing it.

Bazzer

your way to modest viv.

I understand. And I'm happy that you're pursuing your dream. Some people don't even have a dream to pursue, and some don't realize it until it's too late. You've got talent out the yin/yang, and that's pretty obvious. Besides, this has been one enjoyable fic. Plus, you even offer to take commisions! I mean, if that's not absolutely the kindest thing I've ever seen, my name is Bob. And it's not Bob. Seriously, how thoughtful can one person be? I mean, you accept our characters, write a fic about them, and *then* you draw stuff for us. Hey, do you mind if I take a rain check? More likely than not, you'll have *plenty* of stuff to draw for a while, and I don't want you swamped. I know how frustrating *that* is. I'll check your live journal, and after you've been able to slow down a bit, I'll request then. Lord only knows how long you can be stressed out before you burnout. Not that you will or anything. It's just easier to keep the creative juices flowing when you don't have a million e-mails asking for stuff. So keep in touch, eh? Talk to you after a while.

Well . . . I'm sorry you couldn't continue, this was just one of the best fics out there. Under normal circumstances I'd offer to take this fic up but. . . I can't, not with the usual stuff.

Anyway - it was good, especially the last few chapters.

To be completely honest, the news is quite heart braking. But I do respect you and your desicions. I have never asked anything of those I don't personally know, and this is no exception. Even though you offered. I ask then that you work on your school work, then you rwork for your friends. Then the reviewers who have always been there. And only if you have nothing to do and are bored out of you skull, that you even think of me.

But I don't see that ever happening, so I really don't expect much. Good luck and study hard.

RZ

PS: you have a nice day too.

aww thats to bad that you can't continue with this story. I was really starting to enjoy it - Oh well real life is more important than fanfic writing. I read your live journey and you do have alot of things taking up your time. And I think I speak for everyone when I say 'Don't worry over not being able to finish this story, you made it further then all the others excluding Sorciere (but shes super-human so its okay)

It was one hell of a ride.

P.s To bad I only started reading at chapter 14 or I may of been eligable ('scuse the spelling) for one of your piccies.Oh well I'll just have to look at the finished results at your site. See yah at Journey through hell.

Well I'm sorry you have to give this up. You really have something going here. Maybe you can find a good enough author to pick up where you left off, hai? Well if you're willing to do pictures I'll gladly take advatage. Can you just do one of Dj maybe with one of the gals. Whichever one you think would be the cutest with him. That would be wonderful. Again I'm sorry you have to give this up. You will be surely missed.

Good bye.

Fantastic! Good to see you back. Don't worry about not writing, it's not like it could've been posted for a while on here anyway.

Keep up the good work, scholastic and story-wise.

Why do I have a deep dark feeling I know who the rat is?

I like the way you made oth my characters friends, please hurry witht the next chapter. Although I guess I'm in no position the ask of certain things, am I?

Bazzer

Sorry it took so long for me to review, I just got bck from vaca.

Very cool, I wonder who the snitch is, and I can't wait for the arrival of Ororo to the little gang. Keep it up!

RZ

You have it started up again! COOL! and I love the ideas comming into play (yup yup) This is cool.I would write more but im running out of time sorry.

Uh oh! Traitor alert, traitor alert! Something stinks here. Why'd Travis suddenly decide to come back? And who's this spy person? And awww... somebody likes Ororo? How cute! Just when everything looks planned out, something unexpected happens. Looks like the crew needs to keep their eyes peeled, because there's no such thing as coincidences. It's gonna be uber-cool when Storm joins the crew. The way it looks, she may be the only sane one in the group! ~_^ Oh, and don't worry about the whole inconsistancy thing. College is hard! I mean, at least you're keeping centered, right? RIGHT...?

*Looks at the review below her own and lights up* The Bunny Queen found another target? Really? My poor characters might get a break now? Thank you, thank you, thank you! There is a God! *Grins and ducks plotbunny thrown by Ageless, then smirks* Gotta do better than that, babe - I'm starting to learn how to avoid the little devils ;)

And now, for the chapter. Carey! My wonderful, gorgeous, adorable Carey - I love that guy. He's so cute ^^ (loved the title, too *grins* Poor Carey - it just isn't his day ^^) Ohhh...Carey *and* Gabe? Twice the hotness? *wide eyes* Ohhhh...

Fortune: Don't even *think* about slash-fic!

Awww...*sigh* You're no fun. Anyway - do we have a traitor? BOOO! Kill the guy! (wait...or girl. You didn't specify the gender *smirk*). And Adrienne actually doubted the heist? Christ, is she trying to give her brother a heart attack? ("Yeah, listen bro, that heist I conned you into? Yeah, that one. Well, I don't know if it'll actually *work*, but we'll try anyway! After all, the worst thing that can happen is that we get killed!")...you know, it's a wonder that Carey is still relatively sane with a sister like her around ^^. Great chapter, babe, and I like the ending even if you didn't :)

Ohhhh...Tora! *evil grin* Oh, we're already *very* familiar with each other...*smirk*

*Ageless leans back from computer screen, folds her arms over her chest, and glares* That was completely unsatisfactory. Completely. Carey must be made to suffer Viva, you understand this? *arches brow* It's best if you just get used to it, because after what I've read, the Bunny Queen is rearing to sink her rabid hoard upon his black-slack-covered ass. *smirk* And now that we have the AU fic to keep us in touch, the rabbits are gonna expload before he knows what hit him. *evil, evil grin*