Reviews for Hell Follows Me
gunitatsuhiko chapter 32 . 1/2/2017
I had to come back and read this again, and I'm so glad I did! You sneaky devil, adding a mini-sequel when I wasn't looking!

I love that I hadn't read this in so long, as it was like reading it for the first time all over again. I still ADORE it. I LOVE it. The characterization, the writing style, the drama, the intrigue. You brought these characters to life, truly. You gave the readers the ability to identify with them, all of them, in some way. I can't wait to read this YET AGAIN.

And also to tell all my DMC loving, fanfiction reading friends to worship this story the same way I do.
Adjstntdsrdr chapter 32 . 11/30/2016
God job. Binged on your fic in 2 and a half days. Loved the Vergil-Vesta dynamic. In fact, I almost have a little crush on Vergil now. And that's odd, since I've been dreaming of Dante for the past week. Also, I guess I should thank all your fans for pushing you write a few more chapters and an epilogue. It was a great end to the story. Love Bunny indeed. . .
Adjstmntdisordr chapter 3 . 11/28/2016
I like your writing style. And I've only reached chapter 3 yet but I'm loving your portrayal of Vergil. More realistic than a lot of fluff pieces online.
Verdin Grey chapter 4 . 8/24/2016
You are truly a writer after my own verbose tastes. Excruciating, exacting, excellent detail over every little thing- and a story that defies the prejudice on original characters.
I absolutely adore your style.
Koocie chapter 13 . 11/7/2015
I am on a binge with reading and I don't think I'm going to stop. I just love stories that takes care to detail everything around them (the characters, their feelings, the scenery) so I can fully submerge myself into the story. Like at the end of the last chapter with Vesta bringing that guy home and Vergil catching her in the act. You can tell she wanted to shrink into a hole and I wouldn't blame her!

And now she's gotten into more trouble because Vergil isn't going to let her leave because of that symbol on her neck. Oh wow, if I was her I'd still try to leave, Vergil is one scary mo-fo! Dante is ever adorable but sometimes I forget that when he needs to get nasty he can switch up his aloof facade real quick!
Guest chapter 15 . 7/14/2015
The best sex scene everrrrrrrrrrrr
Guest chapter 6 . 7/13/2015
Amazing in a horse indeed
Hiii chapter 2 . 7/13/2015
Hi i have an account here but im tooooo lazy to login, anyway i really like ur story, but i just think u r toooooooooooooo lenghty on descriptions, like 6 lines describing the light, the floor, but anyway it is a good thing for some and a bad one for others. Im not criticizing, u did an amazing job, smth i cant myself, but still just think its too much description at times ;)

Anyway ill read till the end and keep reviewing, thanks
Night Companion chapter 32 . 7/7/2015
ROLF! Tora! This was great! I am really glad I waited to read your ending until after the worst part of my personal hellish ordeal (or, rather, this one after the ones I've had - ah, you know what I mean...) was over. I certainly needed the laughs but had no idea how many I was going to get. *huge grin*

Boy, Vesta and Vergil are quite the lusty, sexy couple. You have me blushing like a schoolgirl. *fans face while lolzing* My favorite part was when Vesta, Trish and Dante were talking over each other with different reactions while asking different questions to Vergil's two "revelations". LMAO! Yep. Vergil's a sly one with a definitively warped sense of humor. Me like. Then Vesta glomps Trish and Trish doesn't bat an eyelash. *chuckling inanely* There is, without doubt, Dante's reaction to Trish staying by blurring to get her stuff out of the car before Vergil can finish his sentence. *howl*

Poor Vesta can't decide where she stands with Vergil although they have obviously been, well, in bed, boisterously, for six months? Which leads to the ultimate demonic love bunny? Awesome! Truely. Hahahaha You're the best for that one alone.

Although, since we are talking me, I would have liked more Dante and Trish interaction, but, hey, you put in enough subtext my own scrumptious scenes were able to pop up. Including several having to do with: "Dante, I thought we were going to bed? Where are you taking me?" Dante, with rakish grin, "I'm taking you to heaven you gorgeous devil. I know I've been a dumbass so from now on this ass is all yours - substituting the "dumb" for "sweet". Now, less talkin and more walkin." *throws her on bed before she can protest or tell him a straightout "No way. No how" before he gets the real inside scoop on her feelings* (*Goofy grin on Night's face*)

Man, I hope I am making sense since I feel all over the place. Be that as it may, I must admit, you did make me want to jump straight back into HWGA without practicing my writing skills. I adore ya. If very few people caught this ending, because I fail to understand the lack of reviews also, then it is definitely their loss. Keep on trucking! Hugs.
MissMurderx666x chapter 32 . 6/24/2015
I've been reading this for quite a while now and never left a review.. Every chapter struck my interest because your writing flows so well and descriptions of characters, facial expressions, environments, etc weren't overly... well.. descriptive lol. I enjoyed seeing the way Vergil developed with Vesta (he really can smile xD!) Usually most fics rush to get the main and OC together but this story has a more realistic approach which I adore. Thank you for this wonderful work! Off to read your other beautiful fics! :D
Guest chapter 12 . 5/17/2015
So she did find the guy at the bar originally after Verge game her the cold shoulder, (damn V, Dante didn't bang the table on purpose!) but it seems like that was a mistake, as I knew it would be. And how lucky is Vesta to kiss both of them! Crap on a fish i would love to do that!
Guest chapter 11 . 5/14/2015
ooh I really liked this one. you could see the emotion sifting through Vergil. And that pillow fight was the best thing evar! Aw, but they got his horse and it was sad how he had to end her.

But on the bright side as least Vesta is getting some attention, though I don't think its the kind she wants right now XD! Dammit I gotta got to bed. College classes will end me!
Guest chapter 7 . 5/14/2015
I totally feel Vergi's pain but hes such a grumpy puss!

Aw she wasnt able to get with that guy at the bar! Gotta watch for those ones, lol
Guest chapter 3 . 5/13/2015
I like Vesta. She reminds me of me! I am such a klutz!

Aww, poor Vergi, he's got some issues he needs to sort out XD! Ah I can't wait to read more tomorrow, it's already 11 where I am! Darnnit!
Britt601 chapter 32 . 5/13/2015
Aww, how cute is it that Vesta is taking her place beside her King, spewing taunts that Vergil takes far too literally! Vergil sure has progressed from this cold and despondent being to this coldly despondent being that frequents in smiles for often. :D

And how fun would that be to pimp Dante out, lol. Seriously, I bet if he was on out place women would come from all over to marvel at that man...but since him and the word 'property damage' go hand in hand I think its safe to adore him from afar.

“It was not my fault that some of the creatures of hell may have escaped and pestered exactly the right houses in town.”

*Gives Vergil the side eye*. Am I reading too much into that statement? That uh..., that sounds a lot like blackmail to me. *Reads a little later*. Yup, it is. That is...really a good idea... for them. I don't think it would go so well if people started doing that in the real world (if they already are in cahoots with that) lol.

I guess they all would need some peace and relaxation after all they've been through. Trish is new territory for me too to write. (Did you get a chance to see her gameplay moves yet?) I guess that would make sense for her to be Vesta's half sister since Mundus...yeah, he's something else all right. And roflmao when they all tried to decipher the Mercy bit, her brain practically fried.

Well, I'm off the fan-dork onto your Thor-Loki fic eventually. Man, that's gonna be awesome...as soon as I find some way to release myself from making Sparda stories, lol!
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