| Reviews for Keep Breathing |
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   Amalthia chapter 2 . 7/15 Lovely story! |
| Anonymous chapter 13 . 2/24 I love this, aaah, I love this story SO MUCH. In many way Obi Wan and Padme are really compatible. Thank you so much for writing it! |
| Abbie-As-Sue.29 chapter 1 . 12/31/2017 Omg the ending nearly killed me.! Poor Jinn. |
| thepkrmgc chapter 13 . 9/4/2017 nice ending, its been a very pleasant read! |
| thepkrmgc chapter 12 . 9/4/2017 nice twist on canon! |
| thepkrmgc chapter 11 . 9/4/2017 i find myself respecting this vader, you give him a fairly nuanced point of view |
| thepkrmgc chapter 10 . 9/4/2017 ghost husband ftw! |
| thepkrmgc chapter 9 . 9/4/2017 shame that ghost dad couldnt talk jinn out of his plans |
| thepkrmgc chapter 8 . 9/4/2017 hopefully the twins and jinn can pull a rescue, or at least padme can find a way to blow up the death star on her own |
| thepkrmgc chapter 7 . 9/4/2017 hopefully she has the sense to tell the twins about vader now, its better that they hear that kind of thing from her |
| thepkrmgc chapter 6 . 9/4/2017 its interesting that your only showing padme's side of things here |
| thepkrmgc chapter 5 . 9/4/2017 considering how much luke accomplished with the minimal training that he got in canon he's going to be really impressive, any plans for a trip to yoda? |
| thepkrmgc chapter 4 . 9/4/2017 of course, I wonder how this luke will fare against vader, and if obi-wan would fall so easily now that he has something to fight for |
| thepkrmgc chapter 3 . 9/4/2017 yea, the focus on the emotional side of things is a good choice |
| thepkrmgc chapter 2 . 9/4/2017 obi-dad best dad! |