Woow I have no words to describe such an amazing history, I love it from starting to end . Thank you so much !

Renaming Harry to Zachary is the stupidest thing you could do to this story. You’re essentially turning an established character into an original character, and everybody hates original characters—for a good reason. Had I known this, I would have never wasted my time reading the first part of your crappy story.

Also, your writing is sloppy. You need to edit the punctuation and capitalization, as half of it is wrong.

I don’t get it. Why is Severus able to walk into this prison? Isn’t it guarded/

please update

can I ask what all the forward slashes are, they are either that or in other chapters it starts in the middle of the sentence it can be quite confusing.

You named him after luscious lol this going be one hell of a roller coaster

what the fuck? snape is the black lion?

Dumbledore is a moron and a fool.

fuck, fuck, fuck. how the fuck is he going to fucking escape?

Oh oh I think I know. In the beginning it shows Lily being kidnapped by death eaters, so Snape probably took Lily and asked her permission and they made Harry I think:) total random guess but I'm curious

R they like Voldemort's children? I'm a bit confused, oh well I'll read more. Great beginning btw

Yeah I'm quite sure, as I have been from the beginning, that Harry is the Wolf and Snape is the lion, in animagus form :P

I read this story ages ago, I forgot everything about, but the idea behind Serpent's Children has always stuck with me ;) kudos to you

An awesome and original chapter! I really liked the animagus description and the lily. And the window metaphor for glamouries. Why not add the epilogue to have a complete story? You're so close! ;)

WOW! I have been an addict to Harry Potter Fanfiction for awhile, and my favorites are ones with Severus! Then it so happened that I would run across these well written amazing stories that were written for the "Severitus Challange". I had no idea what the challenge was or why it was called Severitus Challenge. But then on my search for good completed stories(I rarely read incomplete stories due to one too many great unfinished ones), I found the AUTHOR who started the challenge that I so adore to read! I really feel like Fred And George Weasley meeting the Maurders in all their glory! You have shaped so many great and wonderful stories thru your challenge! I thank you for your great contributions to this fandom! And I thank you for your incredible story as well! I am honored to have found and read your story. Even my husband, who finds my fanfiction reading silly and lacking depth, was impressed with the depth of your stories as I excitedly related scenes and things from the plot! May life bring you great joys! The depth of your impact is incredible! Please, do not ever doubt your worth, for you are truly an amazing gem, probably unaware of great things that have come from your story and challenge. Really, You are amazing! I hope that you are able to read this, since according to your profile it looks like you have been away for awhile. Thank you again!