| Reviews for Don't Fight Me |
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Guest chapter 1 . 3/18/2016 great story! especially loved tobey's last line. |
codyhobgood271 chapter 1 . 10/11/2013 Awesome job I liked it. :) |
Natanael Garrido chapter 1 . 6/13/2013 Nice to see Wordgirl does care for him...it just had to come out someway...by tobey having an accident but pretty sure Wordgirl would care for anyone who's hurt..even the villians.. |
KimDWil71 chapter 1 . 4/1/2013 Awww, I like this story too. I like the tender Wordgirl/Tobey moments. Good job and keep up the good work on more like it in the future. |
Guest chapter 1 . 1/4/2013 :) Two thumbs up! |
1000goldpipes chapter 1 . 4/24/2011 A great story, very realistic and moving. Like a pearl, small and simple, yet perfect, beautiful, and valuable. |
Endless Secrets chapter 1 . 3/6/2011 Great work, this is excellent! :) |
Itanu chapter 1 . 5/12/2010 Ah, very well-done! Capital-C, this is a nice little oneshot. Short, Yes, but also very charming and sweet. Your spelling is perfect here, for one thing. I do have just one comment on grammar, though: most of Tobey's words seem to be unnecessarily italicized. You might want to check that out- I'm seeing these italics in a lot of places where the emphasis brought by said font don't seem necessary. Then again, I may be wrong. Other than that, though, your grammar is great, as far as I can see. Awesome! With that out of the way, I just want to let you know, I find it nice that instead of this just being another OOC Tobey/Wordgirl fic, Wordgirl and Tobey act exactly as one might expect them to be acting if a situation like this were to occur. Even the fine details, such as the exact jokes Tobey uses here, easily sound like him. It's also great that this isn't a story about some hardcore, undeveloped romance that just comes out of nowhere. It is a plausible, simple transaction which still manages to touch the heart. In short, nice little oneshot here! Until next time, Capital-C! Signed with Humility, Itanu the Author. |
faeriedust12 chapter 1 . 4/25/2010 I like it, well-written :) Yay Tobey and Wordgirl! Maybe you could write more of them? There aren't enough good writers for those two. |
KingOfTheLab chapter 1 . 1/17/2010 Very well done. You showed WordGirl's concern excellently. |
acosta perez jose ramiro chapter 1 . 1/10/2010 Hey, very good one. Keep the good writing. |
Badwolf1993 chapter 1 . 12/13/2009 Aw, this is cute! I love it. I think you should write more. Great job! |
Lovegood chapter 1 . 12/8/2009 Aw, that's cute. She cares for him YAY! Nice job on the story! |