Oh this is most excellent. I like it a lot. :)

Mags

Aw, poor Hatter torture (:D) and him saving alice in the end! Very nicely written.

Very well written and I like the "Mad as a hatter" motiff :) Just so you know in the future the line that you skipped when Mad March comes in is:

"When is a raven a writing desk, the clockwork isn't ticking right, there must be crumbs in the butter." And Mad March actually says "Twinkle, twinkle little bat how I wonder WHAT you're at." It's from the book (which I was forced to read in school two years ago... I'm kinda glad that I read now though...) Yes, it's increibly hard to hear and no, it does not make a lick of sense but neither did the rest of that blasted book .

Thanks so much for writing! Much love!

3 3 Northern

Interesting take on this scene. The mini-series left the audience to wonder what exactly was going on in both Hatter's head and in that eerie room. I think you did a nice job filling in that blank.

Great job.

Take care.

That was great I loved it him worrying about her

Maria

Very good. I liked it. Nice insight. Great job and keep up the great writing!

I loved that! I love Hatter so much!

nice, hope you write more!