Reviews for The First Breath
chapter 17 . 3/10
Aww! At last!
chapter 19 . 10/1/2014
That's sort of cute.
luvtwilight14 chapter 19 . 3/27/2014
Very very sweet story yet too too short ! It's hard to find AH jasper/Bella fics and I want them to last forever! Ha. Thanks for sharing!
Hugs Stephanie
chapter 19 . 2/4/2014
Fuckin' brilliant story :-)
missmelly chapter 18 . 1/12/2014
Well, this is just astonishing. It's good enough to be published. I devoured it over the course of the weekend and I will favorite it for reading again.
LizziePaige chapter 19 . 11/11/2013
Loved, loved, loved this story. Your writing was very descriptive, particularly the early chapters surrounding Charlie's death. When you wrote about Jasper seeing Bella for the first time, and her breaking down in the driveway, I felt as if I was there seeing it with my own eyes. Thanks so much for this story and for this wonderful also enjoyed your usage of some of the lesser characters from the twilight series taking a major role in this story, and the absence of the "usual gang" - great job! :)
An Avid Reader Forever chapter 19 . 5/22/2013
great story
manchester.girl chapter 19 . 3/31/2013
This was truly amazing. Loved the plot and the development.
Probably the best Jasper x Bella story I've read on here.
Good job
honeybun37876 chapter 1 . 3/15/2013
how nice of jasper to look after peter
BeachRosey chapter 19 . 12/26/2012
Great story. Its the second of yours I've read. I usually only read E/B but you make me love B/J!
BeachRosey chapter 8 . 12/26/2012
Her brother should have facts prior to talking to Bella like he did. I'm really disappointed in him. I also hope Bella is a big girl and talks to jasper instead of ignoring him for here forward.
BeachRosey chapter 4 . 12/26/2012
He tried so hard todo the right thing, she just wouldn't accept no.
MiserysMama chapter 19 . 12/2/2012
I've read this story before, but it has been awhile. Just as good the second time around. I rally like a good Jasper and Bella story. If I haven't said it before, I'll say it now. Thank you.
mamamalea chapter 19 . 10/18/2012
Great story love Jasper and Bella :-)
akk87 chapter 19 . 9/4/2012
LOVE this story! Thanks for writing such an amazing take on grief and family... Bravo!
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