| Reviews for The First Breath |
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| chapter 17 . 3/10 Aww! At last! |
| chapter 19 . 10/1/2014 That's sort of cute. |
| luvtwilight14 chapter 19 . 3/27/2014 Very very sweet story yet too too short ! It's hard to find AH jasper/Bella fics and I want them to last forever! Ha. Thanks for sharing! Hugs Stephanie |
| chapter 19 . 2/4/2014 Fuckin' brilliant story :-) |
| missmelly chapter 18 . 1/12/2014 Well, this is just astonishing. It's good enough to be published. I devoured it over the course of the weekend and I will favorite it for reading again. |
| LizziePaige chapter 19 . 11/11/2013 Loved, loved, loved this story. Your writing was very descriptive, particularly the early chapters surrounding Charlie's death. When you wrote about Jasper seeing Bella for the first time, and her breaking down in the driveway, I felt as if I was there seeing it with my own eyes. Thanks so much for this story and for this wonderful also enjoyed your usage of some of the lesser characters from the twilight series taking a major role in this story, and the absence of the "usual gang" - great job! :) |
| An Avid Reader Forever chapter 19 . 5/22/2013 great story |
| manchester.girl chapter 19 . 3/31/2013 This was truly amazing. Loved the plot and the development. Probably the best Jasper x Bella story I've read on here. Good job |
| honeybun37876 chapter 1 . 3/15/2013 how nice of jasper to look after peter |
| BeachRosey chapter 19 . 12/26/2012 Great story. Its the second of yours I've read. I usually only read E/B but you make me love B/J! |
| BeachRosey chapter 8 . 12/26/2012 Her brother should have facts prior to talking to Bella like he did. I'm really disappointed in him. I also hope Bella is a big girl and talks to jasper instead of ignoring him for here forward. |
| BeachRosey chapter 4 . 12/26/2012 He tried so hard todo the right thing, she just wouldn't accept no. |
| MiserysMama chapter 19 . 12/2/2012 I've read this story before, but it has been awhile. Just as good the second time around. I rally like a good Jasper and Bella story. If I haven't said it before, I'll say it now. Thank you. |
| mamamalea chapter 19 . 10/18/2012 Great story love Jasper and Bella :-) |
| akk87 chapter 19 . 9/4/2012 LOVE this story! Thanks for writing such an amazing take on grief and family... Bravo! |