Aw, why did you stop this story. It's hilarious. :'(

OK I know you haven't updated in I don't know how long, but you so have to update! This is so awesome and I'm suck at a cliff hanger! please Update!

- Meaghan

PLEASE UPDATE SOON!

I've been waiting for two years now!

Cleon is so romantic don't you think?

You should made Kel wear skimpy outfits in front of him to make seem aroused (not sexually, just romantically).

I wonder if Neal and Kel will hit off straight away as friends, it would be so cute if Cleon got jealous again!

Lovin' the story so far!

KEEP IT UP!

sorry for shouting

...Legolas... as in LOTR?

UPDATE! Please? *puppy dog look* And she has a bunch of friends. This is good. PLEASEPLEASEPLEASE continue!

Please, Starless Night if your out there please update, this story is really, really good. Please please please update!

Mustang Gal

NO! YOU CAN'T JUST LEAVE US LIKE THIS!
I know you haven't updated in over a year, but-but-NEAL! YOU HAVE TO INCLUDE NEAL!
*pant pant pant*
I'm-done-
-LQ

Very funny throughout, in short I loved it. I like the whole "denial thing", though I think that you should do a sister fic in Cleons POV, either around the time that he realises that he's fallen in love with Kel/his graduation party, or in the same timeline as Midsummer's Dance. Though, if like me you are too lazy, send it out as a challenge (try the Seanfhocal circle at http:/pub162.ezboard.com/bthedancingdove). But I really like your writing style (which is pretty distinctive), so I don't think that it would be the same if someone else did it. Please update soon, since this is definitely the best AU TP fic that I've ever read.

wow, i havent looked at this story in so long. and you also havent updated in about a year! please please please update soon so i dont lose hope and never read this story again! ... well maybe im going to the extreme here.
but hurry! this is one of my favorites!

that was funny! i have a friend obsessed with legolas. i think that 5he dog was very smart to.. um... make use of cleon's shoes. and by theway, as much as i like the fic, KEL IS MEANT TO BE WITH DOM!
i am soory for that emotional outburst, buti feel strongly about the subject. good fic though.

This is a very well written piece adn I like it a lot, but I was reading "First Test", and Joren's hair is silver blond, and his eyes are blue

Heh, great chapter. Truthfully, that is how most of my guy friends act so I think u hit the nail on the head for this one. Of course I can't be sure, I'm a girl and am to afraid of the answer to ask, but it seemed acurate to me. Great story! I love it!

ohh, my god! this was absofreakinlutely hiarious!
i loved it! hey, could u email me the next time u update?
rya

Ya know,

This story makes me wish I was seventeen.

Then this "awkward stage" would fit in perfectly.

Like that time I tripped over my feet and almost fell in the toilet...

Or that time I was walking to a class and tripped over a near invisible pole only to rip my skirt...

Or that time I woke up late, and went around looking like an overgrown roach of a monkey...

Or that... well.

You get the picture.

why have you abandoned this fic? I really liked it... please continue it !